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Windmills

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by crackgmat007 » Thu Aug 06, 2009 7:40 am
As sources of electrical power, windmills now account for only about 2,500 megawatts
nationwide, but production is almost expected to double by the end of the year, which
would provide
enough electricity for 1.3 million households.
A. almost expected to double by the end of the year, which would provide
B. almost expected that it will double by the end of the year, thus providing
C. expected that it will almost double by the end of the year to provide
D. expected almost to double by the end of the year and thus to provide
E. expected almost to double by the end of the year, which would thus be providing

Pls provide reasoning for eliminating a choice. Tx.
Last edited by crackgmat007 on Fri Aug 07, 2009 9:41 am, edited 1 time in total.
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by pandeyvineet24 » Thu Aug 06, 2009 7:51 am
Should be D in my opinion

A - but production is almost expected , is should be Production is expected ..... Also which followed by comma refers to immediate noun "year" , where as it should be referring to production.

B - but production is almost expected , is should be Production is expected , Also "it" does not have a clear referent (production or electrical power)

C - Wordy and unclear

D - Correct, infinitive "to provide" is also used in the correct sense

E - incorrect usage of Which and since the sentence is in present tense, it should use Will rather than Would.
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Re: Windmills

by madhur_ahuja » Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:59 am
IMO C

Position of almost is critical. It should modify double as it is doing in C

As sources of electrical power, windmills now account for only about 2,500 megawatts
nationwide, but production is almost expected to double by the end of the year, which
would provide enough electricity for 1.3 million households.
A. almost expected to double by the end of the year, which would provide
B. almost expected that it will double by the end of the year, thus providing
C. expected that it will almost double by the end of the year to provide
D. expected almost to double by the end of the year and thus to provide
E. expected almost to double by the end of the year, which would thus be providing
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by shilpi84 » Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:22 am
crackgmat007 please underline ur sentence!!!!!!
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by sanjib » Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:47 am
IMO C
Please provide the OA and source please.
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by mehravikas » Thu Aug 06, 2009 1:45 pm
IMO - D
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Re: Windmills

by shahdevine » Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:05 pm
crackgmat007 wrote:As sources of electrical power, windmills now account for only about 2,500 megawatts
nationwide, but production is almost expected to double by the end of the year, which
would provide enough electricity for 1.3 million households.
A. almost expected to double by the end of the year, which would provide
B. almost expected that it will double by the end of the year, thus providing
C. expected that it will almost double by the end of the year to provide
D. expected almost to double by the end of the year and thus to provide
E. expected almost to double by the end of the year, which would thus be providing

Pls provide reasoning for eliminating a choice. Tx.
D

"almost" should modify "double" not "expected." also parallelism "to double" and "to provide"
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by arorag » Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:59 pm
C looks fine
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Re: Windmills

by ankit1383 » Thu Aug 06, 2009 4:45 pm
madhur_ahuja wrote: C. expected that it will almost double by the end of the year to provide
Madhur...what does it refer to in the sentence...is it windmill or production....subject of the sentence is windmill
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Re: Windmills

by madhur_ahuja » Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:04 pm
ankit1383 wrote:
madhur_ahuja wrote: C. expected that it will almost double by the end of the year to provide
Madhur...what does it refer to in the sentence...is it windmill or production....subject of the sentence is windmill
It should refer to production ideally .. but I am confused .. this can be case of ambiguous reference.
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Re: Windmills

by vyomb » Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:30 am
crackgmat007 wrote:As sources of electrical power, windmills now account for only about 2,500 megawatts
nationwide, but production is almost expected to double by the end of the year, which
would provide enough electricity for 1.3 million households.
A. almost expected to double by the end of the year, which would provide
B. almost expected that it will double by the end of the year, thus providing
C. expected that it will almost double by the end of the year to provide
D. expected almost to double by the end of the year and thus to provide
E. expected almost to double by the end of the year, which would thus be providing

Pls provide reasoning for eliminating a choice. Tx.
My ans is marked in bold
3-2 split eliminate option A and B almost expected wrong usage.
right Usage
Production is expected to double
Eliminate option C as 'it' used is dangling modifier.
Eliminate option E -which would thus be awkward usage

In Option D-Parallelism to double .. to provide
OA pls.
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IMO D

by Kenable55 » Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:10 am
IMO D as well... to provide is parallel

also "production is expected almost" is the correct order of words

thus is the right connector as it is pointing to a consequence of doubling the production. The use of which does not communicate the meaning clearly.
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by crackgmat007 » Fri Aug 07, 2009 9:44 am
OA - D source: paper test
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