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by GmatKiss » Wed Oct 19, 2011 12:53 pm
As business grows more complex, students majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and
marketing have been becoming increasingly
successful in the job market.

(A) majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming increasingly
(B) who major in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are becoming more and more
(C) who majored in specialized areas such as those of finance and marketing are being increasingly
(D) who major in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming more and
more
(E) having majored in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are being increasingly
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by neelgandham » Wed Oct 19, 2011 2:38 pm
OA B
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by patanjali.purpose » Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:05 pm
GmatKiss wrote:As business grows more complex, students majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and
marketing have been becoming increasingly
successful in the job market.

(A) majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming increasingly
(B) who major in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are becoming more and more
(C) who majored in specialized areas such as those of finance and marketing are being increasingly
(D) who major in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming more and
more
(E) having majored in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are being increasingly
Sentence talking about a general phenomena in present and therefore use of simple present or present continous needed.

Drop A, C & E
D - multiple issues: (1) usage of LIKE for example; (2) present perfect continuous when simple present will do; (3) use of THOSE leads to redundancy

IMO B
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by aspirant2011 » Wed Oct 19, 2011 8:41 pm
GmatKiss wrote:As business grows more complex, students majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and
marketing have been becoming increasingly
successful in the job market.

(A) majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming increasingly
(B) who major in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are becoming more and more
(C) who majored in specialized areas such as those of finance and marketing are being increasingly
(D) who major in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming more and more
(E) having majored in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are being increasingly
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by sam2304 » Wed Oct 19, 2011 9:23 pm
IMO B

Only B C uses who major. finance and marketing are examples of specialized areas so such as should be used. Hence B.
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by zaarathelab » Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:48 pm
GmatKiss wrote:As business grows more complex, students majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and
marketing have been becoming increasingly
successful in the job market.

(A) majoring in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming increasingly
(B) who major in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are becoming more and more
(C) who majored in specialized areas such as those of finance and marketing are being increasingly
(D) who major in specialized areas like those of finance and marketing have been becoming more and
more
(E) having majored in such specialized areas as finance and marketing are being increasingly
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