GmatKiss wrote:A representative of the Women's Bureau of the United States Department of Labor contends that employers who offer benefits which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing gains in attendance, recruiting, and retention.

(A) which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing
(B) which permit employees balancing home and work responsibilities better will realize
(C) that permit employees to balance the responsibilities of home and work better will realize
(D) that permit employees a better balance between the responsibilities of home and work, thus realizing
(E) such that employees are permitted a balance between home and work responsibilities, and they will realize

gmatblood wrote:

GmatKiss wrote:A representative of the Women's Bureau of the United States Department of Labor contends that employers who offer benefits which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing gains in attendance, recruiting, and retention.

(A) which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing
(B) which permit employees balancing home and work responsibilities better will realize
(C) that permit employees to balance the responsibilities of home and work better will realize
(D) that permit employees a better balance between the responsibilities of home and work, thus realizing
(E) such that employees are permitted a balance between home and work responsibilities, and they will realize

IMO:C

GmatKiss wrote:A representative of the Women's Bureau of the United States Department of Labor contends that employers who offer benefits which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing gains in attendance, recruiting, and retention.

(A) which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing
the Q statement want to say that what happen to employers who offer benefits ==> we have to use 'to realize' not realizing
(B) which permit employees balancing home and work responsibilities better will realize
this can be a good choice but the use of' which' here give us the idea that it is an extra info while it is not
(C) that permit employees to balance the responsibilities of home and work better will realize
(D) that permit employees a better balance between the responsibilities of home and work, thus realizing
(E) such that employees are permitted a balance between home and work responsibilities, and they will realize

mehrasa wrote:first of all, ccording to 2/3 split rule, I will drop the choices a,b,e and keep c and d... between c and d which start with 'that', "c' will be a better choice since at the end use "to realize"

IMO: C

GmatKiss wrote:

mehrasa wrote:first of all, ccording to 2/3 split rule, I will drop the choices a,b,e and keep c and d... between c and d which start with 'that', "c' will be a better choice since at the end use "to realize"

IMO: C

I dont think the 2/3 rule applies for all the questions in GMAC!

GmatKiss wrote:A representative of the Women's Bureau of the United States Department of Labor contends that employers who offer benefits which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing gains in attendance, recruiting, and retention.

(A) which permit that employees can balance home and work responsibilities better, realizing ----realising is modifying employees & it is wrong
(B) which permit employees balancing home and work responsibilities better will realize
(C) that permit employees to balance the responsibilities of home and work better will realize
(D) that permit employees a better balance between the responsibilities of home and work, thus realizing
(E) such that employees are permitted a balance between home and work responsibilities, and they will realize