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Tricky SC Question from old GMAT Prep

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by san2009 » Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:36 am
Unlike the low status accorded the craftwork of many women settlers in the nineteenth-century American West, Native American women of the Plains tribes often received public recognition, wealth, and prestige for their craftwork.

(A) Unlike the low status accorded the craftwork of many women settlers in the nineteenth-century American West, Native American women of the Plains tribes
(B) Unlike many women settlers in the nineteenth-century American West, whose craftwork was accorded low status, Native American women of the Plains tribes
(C) Native American women of the Plains tribes, unlike the craftwork of many women settlers in the nineteenth-century American West,
(D) The craftwork of many women settlers in the nineteenth-century American West was accorded low status, while that of the Native American women of the Plains tribes
(E) While low status was accorded the craftwork of many women settlers in the nineteenth-century American West, that of Native American women of the Plains tribes


My take:
a) incorrect comparison. the word "unlike" signals comparison. in this sentence, they are comparing the low status accorded to women from America West to Native American women
b) The placement of the noun modifier "whose" is incorrect - seems to be modifying America West - when it should be modifying the women settlers
c) Incorrect comparison
d) correct comparison -- craftwork of women from America West is compared to "that of" north american women
e) incorrect comparison -- indicated by "while"

My answer is D. OA is B.

can any one explain?
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by kvcpk » Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:24 am
comparing apples to apples:

A: Compares status to american women
B. compares correctly women and native american women.
C compares women to work.
D. while that of the Native American women of the Plains tribes often received public recognition, wealth, and prestige for their craftwork. - IS wrong. Craftwork is repeated at the end. Its could concisely be written as:
while that of the Native American women of the Plains tribes often received public recognition, wealth, and prestige.
E: "accorded the craftwork of many women " is wrong. Illogical comparison also.

pick B
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by san2009 » Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:36 am
yo kvcpk
what abt the modifier issue in B?
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by kvcpk » Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:53 am
san2009 wrote:yo kvcpk
what abt the modifier issue in B?
whose cannot refer to a place. So whose is referring only to women settlers.
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by san2009 » Thu Jul 15, 2010 2:54 am
but i thought when there is a comma before a noun modifier, then it must TOUCH the noun.
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by paes » Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:12 am
san2009 wrote:but i thought when there is a comma before a noun modifier, then it must TOUCH the noun.
In case of a preposition, whose/which can refer to the noun before the preposition.

Unlike many women settlers in the nineteenth-century American West, whose
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by san2009 » Thu Jul 15, 2010 4:52 am
Thanks Paes. Can you please tell me what's wrong with answer choice D?
I didn't get KVCPK's expanation. thanks.
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by kvcpk » Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:15 am
san2009 wrote:Thanks Paes. Can you please tell me what's wrong with answer choice D?
I didn't get KVCPK's expanation. thanks.
Let me try one more time.

in option D , In "while that of the Native American..." what is "that" referring to?
"that" is referring to craftwork.

Now look at the end of the sentence "..and prestige for their craftwork"

Craftwork is repeated unnecessarily.

Helpful??
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by selango » Thu Jul 15, 2010 7:52 am
Option D is expanded like this.

The craftwork of many women settlers in the nineteenth-century American West was accorded low status, while that of the Native American women of the Plains tribes often received public recognition, wealth, and prestige for their craftwork.

Here "that" refer craftwork.Note that at the end of the sentence craftwork is used again and redundant.

The correct one is,

The craftwork of many women settlers in the nineteenth-century American West was accorded low status, while thatof the Native American women of the Plains tribes often received public recognition, wealth, and prestige.
--Anand--
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by paes » Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:01 am
san2009 wrote:Thanks Paes. Can you please tell me what's wrong with answer choice D?
I didn't get KVCPK's expanation. thanks.
Just read the second part of sentence with D:

.... while that(work) of the Native American women of the Plains tribes often received public recognition, wealth, and prestige for their craftwork.

1st error : work received prestige, wealth

2nd error : their(plural) at the end of the statement cann't refer back to work(singular)
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by san2009 » Thu Jul 15, 2010 8:02 am
Thanks KVCPK and Selnago. Got it now :)
I wouldn't have caught that in a 100 years and didn't even know about the modifier exception with the prepositional phrase. Have you guys seen such a redundant reference pop up in other SC questions, or not generally?
What are you guys using to study for SC besides MGMAT SC guide??
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