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by [email protected] » Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:23 pm
16. No matter how patiently they explain their reasons for confiscating certain items, travelers often treat customs inspectors like wanton poachers rather than government employees.(A) travelers often treat customs inspectors like wanton poachers rather than government employees
(B) travelers often treat customs inspectors as wanton poachers instead of government employees
(C) travelers often treat customs inspectors as if they were not government employees but wanton poachers
(D) customs inspectors are often treated by travelers as if they were wanton poachers rather than government employees
(E) customs inspectors are often treated not like government employees but wanton poachers by travelers

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by Bidisha800 » Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:50 pm
"No matter how patiently they explain their reasons for confiscating certain items" modifies custom officers. (D) and (E) remains.

(D) is grammatically correct
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by amitabhprasad » Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:12 pm
can any body suggests why use of "instead of" in correct in "B"
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by crazy4gmat » Thu Jan 22, 2009 6:31 am
D for me.. the non underlined portion of the sentence should modify customs inspectors ..hence A,B and C are out. E is gramatically incorrect.
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by hariharakarthi » Thu Jan 22, 2009 10:57 am
Hi,

IMO D.

D and E are possible contenders. I have eliminated E - because of sentence construciton.

crazy4gmat & Bidisha800 : Can you explain what is grammatically incorect in E?

Regards,

Karthi
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by techwiz » Thu Jan 22, 2009 3:55 pm
D correctly uses subjuctive mood, i.e. IF..Were..
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by pbanavara » Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:26 pm
amitabhprasad wrote:can any body suggests why use of "instead of" in correct in "B"
When you use 'instead of' it usually signifies replacement. For example :

I ate carrots instead of beans. ( carrots and bananas are both edible and you can technically eat carrots instead of beans ).
I will do physical labor instead of this job ( the verbs signify similar action here )

where as ...

Travelers treat customs officers like poachers instead of government officials - You cannot replace poachers with government officials so instead of doesn't make sense. So we use 'rather than'.

Hope this helps.

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