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The Fair Credit Reporting Act, a measure passed by Congress just before its summer recess began, requires that a consumer reporting agency exercise their responsibility to maintain con�dentiality.

that a consumer reporting agency exercise their responsibility to maintain con�dentiality

a consumer reporting agency to exercise its responsibility and maintaining con�dentiality

that a consumer reporting agency had exercised its responsibility to maintain con�dentiality

that consumer reporting agencies exercise their responsibility to maintain con�dentiality

a consumer reporting agency that it should exercise its responsibility to maintain con�dentiality

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IMO - E
please note that there is subtle difference in choices between this question and
the below https://www.beatthegmat.com/fair-credit- ... 62938.html [/spoiler]
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by vishalkc2 » Fri Dec 10, 2010 10:11 am
IMO D

Subjunctive

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by arora007 » Fri Dec 10, 2010 10:18 am
I agree with you.. feeling rusty..its been a long while..
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by kt00381n » Fri Dec 10, 2010 10:20 am
D, of the subj and parallelism


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by arora007 » Fri Dec 10, 2010 10:24 am
unfortunately this stuff from knewton did not have answers with it. but i think you are right D should be correct.
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by kt00381n » Fri Dec 10, 2010 10:28 am
ohh i c, thanks

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by BastiG » Sat Dec 11, 2010 9:37 am
+1 d

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by torontowarrior » Sat Dec 11, 2010 11:42 am
I think the answer should be E.

1. D changes the original 'agency' to agencies.

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by kapur.arnav » Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:22 pm
arora007 wrote:The Fair Credit Reporting Act, a measure passed by Congress just before its summer recess began, requires that a consumer reporting agency exercise their responsibility to maintain con�dentiality.
that a consumer reporting agency exercise their responsibility to maintain con�dentiality - a consumer.... their... SVA error...

a consumer reporting agency to exercise its responsibility and maintaining con�dentiality - parallelism error...

that a consumer reporting agency had exercised its responsibility to maintain con�dentiality - tense error...

that consumer reporting agencies exercise their responsibility to maintain con�dentiality - best answer...

a consumer reporting agency that it should exercise its responsibility to maintain con�dentiality - should be requires that.... subjunctive....

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by diebeatsthegmat » Fri Feb 04, 2011 12:56 am
arora007 wrote:The Fair Credit Reporting Act, a measure passed by Congress just before its summer recess began, requires that a consumer reporting agency exercise their responsibility to maintain con�dentiality.

that a consumer reporting agency exercise their responsibility to maintain con�dentiality ( should be its instead of their)

a consumer reporting agency to exercise its responsibility and maintaining con�dentiality ( because of subjunstive, it should be " agency sexercise its responsibility to maintain)

that a consumer reporting agency had exercised its responsibility to maintain con�dentiality

that consumer reporting agencies exercise their responsibility to maintain con�dentiality ( isnt "consumer" is singular noun? it sounds like this answer choice has problem but its better than others)

a consumer reporting agency that it should exercise its responsibility to maintain con�dentiality ( and wordy)

[spoiler]
IMO - E
please note that there is subtle difference in choices between this question and
the below https://www.beatthegmat.com/fair-credit- ... 62938.html [/spoiler]

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