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Statue of goddess Athena

by yass20015 » Sun Aug 09, 2015 1:30 am
Based on records from ancient Athens, each year young Athenian women collaborated to weave a new woolen robe that they used to dress a statue of the goddess Athena and that this robe depicted scenes of a battle between Zeus, Athena's father, and giants.
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by GMATGuruNY » Sun Aug 09, 2015 3:11 am
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by Jim@StratusPrep » Sun Aug 09, 2015 6:18 am
The introductory clause makes it sound as though 'each year' was based on records -- this does not make sense.
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