sentence correction challenge

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sentence correction challenge

by gmat-10 » Sat Jun 19, 2010 9:23 am
Please fix this sentence:
"Cubes of homemade cottage cheese cooked on a very high heat in a wok with fresh tomatoes, onions, ginger, green peppers, Shrimp cooked on a very high heat in a wok with fresh herbs and spices. "

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by hardik.jadeja » Sat Jun 19, 2010 10:28 am
Although I don't know the recipe of what we are cooking here, I am giving it a try, hoping that it would taste good.. :lol:

Cubes of homemade cottage cheese were cooked on a very high heat in a wok with fresh tomatoes, onions, ginger, green peppers and Shrimp cooked on a very high heat in a wok with fresh herbs and spices.

Let me know if its the correct recipe, I mean if its the correct sentence.