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by leo » Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:17 am
Promotions, retirements, deaths, and other actions
approved by the board of directors at its May meeting
will be reported in the July 15 issue of the company
paper
.

(A) Promotions, retirements, deaths, and other
actions approved by the board of directors at
its May meeting will be reported in the July
15 issue of the company paper.
(B) Promotions, retirements, and other actions
which have been approved at the May meeting
of the board of directors along with deaths,
with be reported in the July 15 issue of the
company paper.
(C) To be reported in the July 15 issue of the
company paper are the promotions, retirements,
deaths, and other actions which were approved at
the board of directors' May meeting.
(D) Meeting in May, the promotions, retirements,
and other actions approved by the board of
directors, including obituaries, will be reported
in the July 15 issue of the company paper.
(E) The July 15 issue of the company paper will
report on promotions, retirements, and other
actions approved by the board of directors at
its May meeting; the paper will also include
obituaries.


Answer Please and why?

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by 800GMAT » Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:27 am
IMO E

A and B seem to imply that the board of directors approves death
C:Inverted word order is awkward
D:Modifier error: Meeting in May, the promotions,...
E: Two independent clauses are separated by semi colon. The sentence is concise; It clarifies the distinction between the actions approved by the board and the obituaries

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by leo » Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:51 am
Answer is E indeed . 800GMAT ,Thanks for the explanation. Was speculating why not A.

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by vanesslondon » Sun Jun 10, 2007 1:43 am
ok, i originally thought A but it's wrong b/c the main sentence talks about actions decided by the board... deaths aren't decided by the board (we hope!) so must be separated.
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by peter.p.81 » Tue Apr 08, 2014 4:24 am
I would have selected E