Sentence Correction

Two reasons why I think E is wrong:

1) It's more direct, active-voiced, and neat to say, "Many people are disinclined" rather than, "Many people have a disinclination"

2) Parellelism is not maintained between "people have a disinclination" and "people...willing to". Otherwise, the latter part of answer E should read, "while they have a willingness to admit".

I vouch for D.

thegmatbeater wrote:

B - which
c - change meaning
E - change the meaning and parral..
A - not sure what wrong (can someone help? )