BREAKING: Target Test Prep releases Brand New 2026 On Demand GMAT prep course

Redeem

Target Test Prep · GMAT

Choose how you want to prepare

Learn live with an expert or move at your own pace. Every option includes the complete TTP study system.

★★★★★5.0559 reviews
Vote for Target Test Prep, Newsweek Readers’ Choice Awards 2026
NEWSWEEK READERS’ CHOICE 2026

BIG NEWS! Target Test Prep has been nominated, and they’d love your vote!

TTP has worked incredibly hard to build the best test prep experience possible, and winning Newsweek’s 2026 Readers’ Choice Award for Best Test Prep would mean a lot to them. If TTP has helped you, they’d be incredibly grateful for your vote. You can vote once each day through September 9.

Vote for TTP
GMATLiveTeach 7 seats left
Chris Peckover
NEXT LIVE COHORT

Oct 13 to Jan 7, 2027

with Chris Peckover

Schedule
Tue, Thu · 8:00 to 10:00 PM ET
Included
40 live hours + 6 months of GMAT OnDemand
  • Live instruction and real-time questions
  • Class recordings and assigned practice
View class & enroll
Limited cohort · enrollment openTarget Test Prep
EALiveTeach 5 seats left
Logan Thompson
EXECUTIVE ASSESSMENT

Sep 6 to Dec 6, 2026

with Logan Thompson

Schedule
Sun · 9:30 AM to 12:30 PM ET
Included
40 hours of live online classes plus six months of access to the complete TTP EA OnDemand course.
  • 165+ EA Score Guarantee
  • 4,100+ Quant, Verbal, and Integrated Reasoning practice questions
  • 400+ hours of in-depth video lessons
  • 3,000+ step-by-step video solutions
View EA class & enroll
Limited cohort · enrollment openTarget Test Prep
GMATOnDemand Start anytime
SELF-PACED MASTERCLASS

Target Test Prep GMAT OnDemand

Complete access from day one. Study on your schedule.

715+ score guarantee
$0to start then $127/mo
  • Personalized study plan and analytics
  • Thousands of lessons and practice questions

Compare the format, schedule, and included access before enrolling. Prices and seat counts shown reflect the supplied offer details.

Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt- Modifier Issue

Expert replies
by abcgmat » Mon Nov 21, 2011 1:25 pm
Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang,China's fi rst emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.

(A) the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's fi rst emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete
(B) Qin Shi Huang, China's fi rst emperor, was protected in his afterlife by an army of terracotta
warriors that was created more than 2,000 years ago by 700,000 artisans who took more than 36 years to complete it
(C) it took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors more than
2,000 years ago that would protect Qin Shi Huang, China's fi rst emperor, in his afterlife
(D) more than 2,000 years ago, 700,000 artisans worked more than 36 years to create an army of
terra-cotta warriors to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's fi rst emperor, in his afterlife
(E) more than 36 years were needed to complete the army of terra-cotta warriors that 700,000
artisans created 2,000 years ago to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's fi rst emperor, in his afterlife.

Can some one explain what is wrong with B
What does rivaling mean in this context.
As per dictionary. It says ' 'a person who is competing for the same object as another' Though they are other meanings as well.

B also looked ok for me. Except for the it at end was not required.
Can we have a
Modifer, subject in passive form. (Is that the error in B)
Join the discussion
Source: — Sentence Correction |

by Brian@VeritasPrep » Mon Nov 21, 2011 2:11 pm
Hey abc,

"Rivaling" here means "like", in way - "rivaling" is used in this case to mean "similar in excellence to". For example you could say:

Rivaling Harvard and Stanford for admissions selectiveness, UC-Berkeley credits its desirable Northern Californian location for its high volume of MBA applications each year.

or

Google Plus hopes to rival Facebook as a leading provider of social networking services.

_____________________________________________________________

Now, all that said, even if you don't know "rivaling" as a definition, you should still have a pretty good idea that the introductory phrase is a modifier. It is separated by a comma, acts only as a description, and the comma touches the underlined portion of the sentence. In that situation, there's an incredibly high probability that you're dealing with a modifier issue first and foremost. And "Qin Shi Huang" isn't an achievement, so he can't logically be modified by that phrase. The terra cotta army is an achievement - it's what the artisans spent 36 years working on, which is similar to pyramids and ancient cities...it's a grand undertaking that has stood the test of time.
Brian Galvin
GMAT Instructor
Chief Academic Officer
Veritas Prep

Looking for GMAT practice questions? Try out the Veritas Prep Question Bank. Learn More.
Join the discussion

by Stuart@KaplanGMAT » Mon Nov 21, 2011 3:33 pm
Hi!

B makes the same mistake as do C, D and E - they all have a giant misplaced modifier. If you recognize that issue (and it's one of the "big 5" grammar issues tested on the GMAT, so you need to be a Master of Modification by test day), then this becomes a 15-30 second question.

Whenever a sentence contains a modifying introductory or concluding phrase, then whatever that phrase is describing must come immediately on the other side of the comma. Here's the general syntax in both cases:

[Modifying phrase], [whatever the phrase is modifying]

or

[whatever the phrase is modifying], [modifying phrase].

In this particular question, we have the introductory modifying phrase "Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement," - so whatever rivals the pyramids must come immediately after the comma. Since the only logical rival for the pyramids/ancient cities is another ancient wonder, we must start the underlined part of the sentence with "the army of terra cotta warriors". Only (A) does this properly, so the original sentence is correct as written.

Going through the wrong choices:

(b) says that Qi Shi Huang himself is like the pyramids - eliminate.

(c) says that "it took 7000 artisans"... is like the pyramids - eliminate.

(d) says that "more than 2,000 years ago" is like the pyramids - eliminate.

(e) says that "more than 36 years were needed..." is like the pyramids - eliminate.



abcgmat wrote:Rivaling the pyramids of Egypt or even the ancient cities of the Maya as an achievement, the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang,China's fi rst emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete.

(A) the army of terra-cotta warriors created to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's fi rst emperor, in his afterlife is more than 2,000 years old and took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to complete
(B) Qin Shi Huang, China's fi rst emperor, was protected in his afterlife by an army of terracotta
warriors that was created more than 2,000 years ago by 700,000 artisans who took more than 36 years to complete it
(C) it took 700,000 artisans more than 36 years to create an army of terra-cotta warriors more than
2,000 years ago that would protect Qin Shi Huang, China's fi rst emperor, in his afterlife
(D) more than 2,000 years ago, 700,000 artisans worked more than 36 years to create an army of
terra-cotta warriors to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's fi rst emperor, in his afterlife
(E) more than 36 years were needed to complete the army of terra-cotta warriors that 700,000
artisans created 2,000 years ago to protect Qin Shi Huang, China's fi rst emperor, in his afterlife.

Can some one explain what is wrong with B
What does rivaling mean in this context.
As per dictionary. It says ' 'a person who is competing for the same object as another' Though they are other meanings as well.

B also looked ok for me. Except for the it at end was not required.
Can we have a
Modifer, subject in passive form. (Is that the error in B)
Image

Stuart Kovinsky | Kaplan GMAT Faculty | Toronto

Kaplan Exclusive: The Official Test Day Experience | Ready to Take a Free Practice Test? | Kaplan/Beat the GMAT Member Discount
BTG100 for $100 off a full course
Join the discussion

by karthikgmat » Tue Nov 22, 2011 8:31 am
Many thanks Brian.
Join the discussion

• Page 1 of 1