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Reptiles

by metallicafan » Thu May 23, 2013 12:38 pm
Reptiles, by drawing their body heat directly from the Sun rather than burning calories to generate it, can survive on ten percent of the nourishment that a mammal of similar size would normally require

A) rather than burning calories to generate it
B) rather than the generation of body heat by burning calories
C) and not from generating it by burning calories
D) instead of by burning calories for generating it
E) instead of body heat generated by burning calories

OA is __A___.

I agree with the OA.
However, which gramatical unit is being made parallel?, the gerunds or the prepositional phrases?
Gerunds: drawing // burning.
Prepositional phrases: by drawing // (by) burning. - I have assumed that "by" has been omitted in the second prepositional phrase?, is that possible?

In the case of comparing just the gerunds that are part of prepositional phrases, is that possible in other parallel structures?
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by ceilidh.erickson » Fri May 24, 2013 11:26 am
You're absolutely correct that "by drawing rather than by burning" would have been grammatically correct. However, "by drawing rather than burning" is also correct. This is just one of the peculiarities of English grammar - we can reuse the preposition, or we can allow it to "carry" to both elements.

We can understand the parallel structure this way:

- Parallel prepositional phrases: Reptiles, 1) by drawing rather than 2) by burning...
- Parallel gerunds: Reptiles, by 1) drawing rather than 2) burning...

So, both are equally correct, but the parallel elements change (slightly) depending on whether we repeat the "by."

This rule - we can use or omit a particular element - also applies to infinitives and helping verbs. Consider:

I want to run and swim = I want to run and to swim.
I will eat and drink = I will eat and will drink.

For more, see here: https://www.beatthegmat.com/survey-paral ... tml#557998
Ceilidh Erickson
EdM in Mind, Brain, and Education
Harvard Graduate School of Education

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