khurram wrote:Researchers have announced that the magnetic fields emitted by one manufacturer’s
security surveillance system, of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that this interaction can bring on missed or irregular heartbeats, nausea, breathlessness, dizziness, and even fainting.
Khurram, underline the parts of the sentence that needs correction !!!
Anyways,
Researchers have announced
that the magnetic fields emitted by one manufacturer’s security surveillance system,
of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that this interaction can bring on missed or irregular heartbeats, nausea, breathlessness, dizziness, and even fainting.
A. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, can interfere with pacemakers and that
B. of which, worldwide, there are 200,000 of that type, and which can interfere with pacemakers, and
C. of which type there are 200,000 worldwide, they can interfere with pacemakers and
D. 200,000 of which type exist worldwide, interfering with pacemakers, and
E. 200,000 of that type existing worldwide and can interfere with pacemakers, and
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IMO,
B,C and E are clearly out.
B/w A and D,
D -
1. does not maintain parallelism "that" is required in the underlined part as well
2. Changes the original meaning of the sentence. original sentence says that magnetic fields CAN interfere...., but D changes this possibility by saying tht magnetic fields are "interfering"
SO, i will stick with A

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