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Profile Evaluation Request

by lukebowes1234 » Mon Aug 31, 2015 5:28 am
GMAT 730 (44Q 47V 8IR)
Undergrad GPA 3.8 Accounting
Passed all 3 levels of the CFA
Age: 24, 25 at matriculation
Work: Small independent Investment Advisory firm in Knoxville, TN. 3 years full time at Matriculation. Also a couple of years as an intern/part-time at same firm while in school.
Undergrad Attended: Small regional liberal arts school. (nothing special)
British Citizen (currently work and live in US on visa)

Extra Curricular: Heavy involvement for 4 years (ending 2 years ago) with the private boarding high school I went to. They have a lot of international students so I helped out in the dorms, as well as being the assistant coach of the HS boys varsity team (all purely as volunteer). Also on a committee of a program, and a chair of another program at the Optimist Club of Knoxville.

My Story: I decided I wanted to live in the US when I was 14. So after finishing HS in England (which happens at age 16), I applied to and enrolled to a private boarding HS in the US. I moved here, on my own, when I was 16. Have since gone through college here and also worked here for a few years now on a work visa.

ST Goals: Investment Banking M&A
LT Goals: Private Equity and perhaps one day PhD and teach Finance when I'm retired from industry.

My 5 schools:

Fuqua
Darden
Johsnon
Ross
Kenan-Flagler

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by Jon@Admissionado » Thu Sep 03, 2015 2:06 am
Hey dude,
So the short of ti, is that everything looks good. And I think you can make the schools you propose.

Buuuut, from reading what you have here, I can't help ask myself: What's your story? What are you like? What do you want? What vision do you have of the future? What communities are you involved in?

I'm sure you have plenty to say, but from the way you have presented things here, they seem a bit cut and dry. and I want more story! and more YOU!


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Jon
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