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by prachich1987 » Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:42 am
It is as difficult to prevent crimes against property as those that are against a person.

(A) those that are against a
(B) those against a
(C) it is against a
(D) preventing those against a
(E) it is to prevent those against a

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by AIM GMAT » Mon Jan 24, 2011 2:49 am
Its E .

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by Target2009 » Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:33 pm
AIM GMAT wrote:Its E .

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by Night reader » Wed Jan 26, 2011 7:05 pm
prachich1987 wrote:It is as difficult to prevent crimes against property as those that are against a person.

(A) those that are against a
(B) those against a
(C) it is against a
(D) preventing those against a
(E) it is to prevent those against a

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OA : E
without summarizing the previous thread, reading the sentence and analyzing its logical sense, grammatical structure and trying to correct the possible mistake -- those that are against a

The sentence is comparing two aspects -->
test for logical fallacy: preventing crimes against property VS. doing so against person - OK
test for grammatical structure: comparison/parallelism error OR preventing crimes against property is as much difficult as doing so against a person --> search for correct rephrase A-E
test, correcting the mistake: answer E) it is (avoiding redundancy here, i.e. it's difficult) to prevent those (avoiding redundancy here, i.e. those=crimes) ...

Correct answer E) follows good logical sense, correct grammatical construction and restates the sentence in the most efficient way (precisely and clearly describes the idea).

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