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by xcusemeplz2009 » Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:26 am
Each year companies in the United State could save as much as $58 billion annually by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as$200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided offices with cleaner air.

A.ã€€annually by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided B.ã€€annually if they prevented employee illness and gain as much as$200 billion through worker performance improved by simply providing
C. annually in employee illness prevention and gain as much as $200 billion through worker performance improved by simply providing D. in employee illness prevention and gain as much as$200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided
E. by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through improved worker performance if they simply provided[spoiler] y A is not correct[/spoiler] It does not matter how many times you get knocked down , but how many times you get up Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts Posts: 141 Joined: 28 Feb 2009 Thanked: 1 times by getso » Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:53 am Annually is redundant...Since each year is already stated at the beginning of the sentence. Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts Posts: 344 Joined: 14 Sep 2009 Thanked: 28 times Followed by:3 members GMAT Score:700 by sunnyjohn » Thu Nov 12, 2009 7:06 pm IMO: E anually is redundant - so A, B, and C are out. out of E and D - D is awkward..I choose E. D - D. in employee illness prevention and gain as much as$200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided

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by gmatv09 » Thu Nov 12, 2009 8:00 pm
IMO E

A.Ã£â‚¬â‚¬annually by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as $200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided B.Ã£â‚¬â‚¬annually if they prevented employee illness and gain as much as$200 billion through worker performance improved by simply providing
C. annually in employee illness prevention and gain as much as $200 billion through worker performance improved by simply providing D. in employee illness prevention and gain as much as$200 billion through improving performance of workers if they simply provided
E. by preventing illness among employees and gain as much as \$200 billion through improved worker performance if they simply provided

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by xcusemeplz2009 » Fri Nov 13, 2009 5:21 am
thanks guys

OA is E
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