In January 1994 an oil barge ran aground off the coast of San Juan, Puerto Rico, leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of the city’s beaches.
A) leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of
B) with its cargo of its cargo of 750000 gallons leaking into the ocean, and it polluted
C) and its cargo of its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting
D) while it leaked its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean and caused the pollution of
E) so that its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, and they were polluting
OA is C...why not B?
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i am not really sure but i think B is not correct because of parallelism.
ran off aground and...leaking - wrong
it should be "ran off aground and... leaked"
P.S. just check with Danielle
ran off aground and...leaking - wrong
it should be "ran off aground and... leaked"
P.S. just check with Danielle
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Hi Sankruth,
I'm a lilttle confused here, although C seems fine because polluting should make the senetence parallel, however
and its cargo of its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting
its cargo of its cargo: this seems to be redundant & awkward
Can you please confirm that there is not typo in the post.
Thanks
Hi Danielle, can you please provide your comments on this one. Thanks
I'm a lilttle confused here, although C seems fine because polluting should make the senetence parallel, however
and its cargo of its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting
its cargo of its cargo: this seems to be redundant & awkward
Can you please confirm that there is not typo in the post.
Thanks
Hi Danielle, can you please provide your comments on this one. Thanks
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B) with its cargo of 750000 gallons leaking into the ocean, and it polluted it reference unclear
C) and its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting
C) and its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting
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