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by smagish » Sat Aug 04, 2012 10:53 am
Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured the preparation
of great quantities of ceremonial food, the wearing of many layers of colorful
clothing adorned with silver, and the recounting of traditional tribal jokes and
stories.
(A) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home, they featured
(B) Festivals were held in Aho, a Kiowa matriarch's home, which featured
(C) Aho, who was a Kiowa matriarch in her home, held festivals featuring
(D) In her home, Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals that featured
(E) Aho, a Kiowa matriarch, held festivals in her home that featured


the OA is D but E was my pick
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by agautam7879 » Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:17 am
The issue in E is - That - that refers to the subject before that which is home in this case - festivals featured and not the home featured

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