gmattoend wrote:In a study published by the US Fish and Wildlife Service, researchers proposed a cause for the chestnut die-off: a fungus called Cryphonectria parasitica, which was introduced to the United States in the early 1900s, invading the tree’s bark, forms cankers as it spreads and lowering the pH of infected tissue to toxic levels, leads to the death of the tree within a short period.
A) invading the tree’s bark, forms cankers as it spreads and lowering the pH of infected tissue to toxic levels, leads
B) invading the tree’s bark, forming cankers as it spreads, lowering the pH of infected tissue to toxic levels, and leading
C) invades the tree’s bark, forming cankers as it spreads and lowers the pH of infected tissue to toxic levels, leading
D) invades the tree’s bark, forms cankers as it spreads and lowering the pH of infected tissue to toxic levels, leading
E) invades the tree’s bark, forming cankers as it spreads and lowering the pH of infected tissue to toxic levels, leading
A conjunction such as
and must serve to connect PARALLEL FORMS.
A and D:
forms...and lowering
In these options,
forms (verb) and
lowering (modifier) are not parallel forms.
Eliminate A and D.
C:
forming...and lowers
Here,
forming (modifier) and
lowers (verb) are not parallel forms.
Eliminate C.
In B,
a fungus (subject) lacks a verb.
The result is an incomplete sentence.
Eliminate B.
I am a bit troubled by the OA.
Generally, a COMMA + VERBing modifier should express an action that is a COMPONENT of the nearest preceding action.
E:
A fungus invades the tree’s bark, forming cankers as it spreads and lowering the pH of infected tissue to toxic levels, leading to the death of the tree within a short period.
Here, the COMMA + VERBing action in red transpires WITHIN A SHORT PERIOD and thus is not a component of the nearest preceding action in blue (
lowering the pH of infected tissue to toxic levels).
As a result, the COMMA + VERBing modifier in red seems misused.
Moreover, I cannot cite an OA from GMAC in which one VERBing modifier (such as
leading) serves to modifier another VERBing modifier (such as
lowering).
While
E is the best of the five options, I am skeptical of its validity.
Last edited by GMATGuruNY on Tue May 08, 2018 4:40 am, edited 1 time in total.
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