neptune28 wrote:GMATGuruNY wrote:
On the GMAT, the agent of a COMMA + VERBing modifier must be the NEAREST preceding subject.
I was reading through your explanation a little more, GMATGuruNY, and I have a couple of questions for you:
2) What exactly do you mean by "nearest preceding subject"? In the first sentence, "cases" is the direct object of an infinitive; and in the second, "breakwater" is the direct object of a gerund. Do you mean "nearest preceding noun that would make sense as a subject"?
A word can serve more than one purpose.
The Army Corps of Engineers proposed building parallel to shore A BREAKWATER OF ROCKS that would rise six feet above the waterline and act as a buffer, ABSORBING the energy of crashing waves and protecting the beaches.
Here,
a breakwater of rocks serves not only as the direct object of
building but also as the SUBJECT of the verbs
would rise and
would act.
What WOULD RISE six feet above the waterline and ACT as a buffer?
A BREAKWATER OF ROCKS.
Many of today's mathematicians use computers to test CASES that would either take too much time or involve too many variables to test manually, ALLOWING them to explore the theoretical issues that were impossible to test a generation ago.
Here,
cases serves not only as the direct object of
to test but also as the subject of the verbs
would take and
would involve.
What WOULD TAKE too much time and INVOLVE too many variables?
CASES.
Note the following:
Every
that-clause has a SUBJECT.
a breakwater of rocks that would rise six feet above the waterline and act as a buffer
Here,
that refers to
a breakwater of rocks.
Implication:
A BREAKWATER OF ROCKS serves as the SUBJECT of the verbs in the
that-clause (
would rise and
would act).
cases that would either take too much time or involve too many variables to test manually
Here,
that refers to
cases.
Implication:
CASES serves as the SUBJECT of the verbs in the
that-clause (
would take and
would involve).
1) Do the writers of the GMAT explicitly state that the "nearest preceding subject" must be the agent of such a participle?
We have to rely on precedent.
From the OG12:
SC30:
ANIMAL-HIDE SHIELDS with wooden frames were essential items of military equipment, PROTECTING warriors against enemy arrows and spears.
Here, the ANIMAL-HIDE SHIELDS are PROTECTING warriors.
SC47:
FIVE FLEDGLING SEA EAGLES left their nests in western Scotland this summer, BRINGING to 34 the number of wild birds successfully raised since transplants from Norway began in 1975.
Here, the FIVE FLEDGLING SEA EAGLES are BRINGING to 34 the number of wild birds successfully raised.
SC65:
A BREAKWATER OF ROCKS that would rise six feet above the waterline and act as a buffer, ABSORBING the energy of crashing waves and PROTECTING the beaches.
Here, a BREAKWATER OF ROCKS is ABSORBING and PROTECTING.
SC94:
The recent surge in the number of airplane flights has clogged the nation's air-traffic control system, LEADING to a 55-percent increase in delays at airports and PROMPTING fears among some officials that safety is being compromised.
Here, the RECENT SURGE is LEADING to an increase in delays and PROMPTING fears.
From GMAT Prep:
Among lower paid workers union members are less likely than non-union members to be enrolled in lower end insurance plans that impose stricter limits on medical services and require DOCTORS to see more patients, SPENDING less time with each.
Here,
spending refers to
doctors, which serves not only as the direct object of
requiring but also as the SUBJECT of
to see.
Conveyed meaning: the DOCTORS are SPENDING less time with each patient.
In every case, the agent of the COMMA + VERBing action is the nearest preceding subject.
The consistency of these SCs suggests a rule: on the GMAT, the agent of a COMMA + VERBing modifier should be the nearest preceding subject.
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GMATGuruNY on Fri Nov 20, 2015 5:14 am, edited 3 times in total.
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