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MGMAT CAT AWA ESSAY: Analyze Argument

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by Brent@GMATPrepNow » Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:31 am
Good essay, Nick.

A couple of points:
- You made this essay about art/music vs. drug treatments, and that's okay, but the prompt also mentions invasive procedures. If the prompt is art/music vs. drug treatments/invasive procedures, then you should mention both.
- Well written and nicely organized.
- I like how you suggested ways to fix the argument.

I'd give this a 5 or 5.5

One last point: always use official prompts when writing practice essays. You can also download them for free from the mba.com site.

Issue prompts: https://www.mba.com/the-gmat/test-struct ... 00606.ashx
Argument prompts: https://www.mba.com/the-gmat/test-struct ... 00606.ashx

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