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by umaa » Fri May 15, 2009 5:17 pm
Dr. King's "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" is a condemning of racial injustice and a calling for nonviolent resistance to that injustice.

Can you please explain me the parallelism with the modified correct answer?
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by gmat740 » Sat May 16, 2009 5:56 am
Dr. King's "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" is a condemning of racial injustice and a calling of nonviolent resistance to that injustice.
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by umaa » Sat May 16, 2009 6:45 am
gmat740, Thanks. But its wrong.
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by myohmy » Sat May 16, 2009 9:42 am
I don't know what the OA is, but I would think the sentence would be constructed like so:

Dr. King's "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" is a condemnation of racial injustice and a call for nonviolent resistance to that injustice.

The original sentence contains two gerunds (I think that's the term).
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by umaa » Sat May 16, 2009 10:38 am
myohmy, you're right. But why can't we use gerunds. condemning and calling??
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by myohmy » Sat May 16, 2009 11:18 am
I think it's slightly idiomatic (people just wouldn't say the sentence that way) as well as the fact that if possible, you should avoid gerunds.

That's not to say they will never be the correct answer - they likely will be in some cases. But if there is an answer choice that corrects the errors in the sentence and does not use gerunds, it's probably better.

Make sure when you do use a gerund that it's preceded with a possessive noun or pronoun, ie

"His condemning of racial injustice in "Letter from a Birmingham Jail" ..."

would be technically correct, but

"His condemnation of racial injustice..."


would be better if it was a choice.

In short, usually if you see a gerund, there's a better noun to use. Gerunds aren't always technically incorrect (in this case they are because the nouns they refer to are not possessive) but if the choice is between a correct gerund and a noun, pick the noun for stylistic reasons.
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