Hi,
The below question appeared in the problem set of chapter 13 in Manhattan GMAT book.
Brokered by the President of Silonia, the ceasefire agreement mandates Carpathian forces will cease their advance into Zapadnia, but allows them to engage in limited operations in areas already captured.
And the correction suggested is:
Brokered by the President of Silonia, the ceasefire agreement mandates that Carpathian forces cease their advance into Zapadnia, but allows them to engage in limited operations in areas already captured.
According to me X but Y should be parallel apart from correcting what the agreement mandates. My answer is :
Brokered by the President of Silonia, the ceasefire agreement mandates Carpathian forces to cease their advance into Zapadnia, but allows them to engage in limited operations in areas already captured.
Adding "to X but to Y" would be better than adding just "that". I am a little confused. Any body knows why my answer is wrong, if it is wrong?
The below question appeared in the problem set of chapter 13 in Manhattan GMAT book.
Brokered by the President of Silonia, the ceasefire agreement mandates Carpathian forces will cease their advance into Zapadnia, but allows them to engage in limited operations in areas already captured.
And the correction suggested is:
Brokered by the President of Silonia, the ceasefire agreement mandates that Carpathian forces cease their advance into Zapadnia, but allows them to engage in limited operations in areas already captured.
According to me X but Y should be parallel apart from correcting what the agreement mandates. My answer is :
Brokered by the President of Silonia, the ceasefire agreement mandates Carpathian forces to cease their advance into Zapadnia, but allows them to engage in limited operations in areas already captured.
Adding "to X but to Y" would be better than adding just "that". I am a little confused. Any body knows why my answer is wrong, if it is wrong?
