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by andy9923 » Sun Aug 24, 2008 2:58 pm
Hi all,

I came across this sentence correction problem on a 2007 edition of Kaplan's GMAT 800 guide book and when to see what everyone thinks about this problem:

32) That pollution harms the environment is self-evident; that immediate government action to combat it is merited by the situation is a matter of debate.

a) that immediate government action to combat it is merited by the situation
b) if the situation merits immediate action by the government is a matter of debate
c) whether to combat the situation is merited by immediate government action
d) that the situation merits immediate government action to combat it
e) whether the government should immediately combat it is merited by the situation

the correct answer is actually d

Well, first of all, I'm not sure why answer choice (b) repeats the "is a matter of debate" part. But that's not the reason why I am writing this post. I wonder why answer (d) can be correct. Doesn't the fact that the answer choice starts with "that" makes it a clause and not a complete sentence? I thought the portion that comes after the ";" has to be a complete sentence. I actually eliminated answer choices (a) and (d) because of this reason.

Thanks for the help

andrew
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by dineshydv » Sun Aug 24, 2008 6:37 pm
The phrase followed by ';' should be a complete sentence by itself. In this way we can remove A, D, E, because the reference to 'it' is ambiguous. C is in passive tense. B seems correct.

What is the correct answer.??
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by wonder » Sun Aug 24, 2008 8:03 pm
wow andy this one's a toughy!:)

lets go by POE -:
A. a) that immediate government action to combat it is merited by the situation ....... you are right that we should have a new sentence after ';'. hence we see that 'it' doesnt really have a referrent in this sentence. also, ...'it is merited by the situation' doesnt fit well with 'is a matter of debate. ' after that.

B.if the situation merits immediate action by the government is a matter of debate ....come one we are not using 'if' here. if is a purely conditional clause. we dont have anything to say like 'if x happens, then y happens)

C.whether to combat the situation is merited by immediate government action ...we read the full sentence and it doesnt make sense right? because there is ......is a matter of debate.
in the end

E whether the government should immediately combat it is merited by the situation ....(is a matter of debate.) again complete sentence doesnt make sense..

D That pollution harms the environment is self-evident; that the situation merits immediate government action to combat it is a matter of debate
now if we read closely, this is infact a new complete sentence after ';' and its parralel too. the 'it' used in this part actually refers to 'situation' which is explicitly stated in the new part after the semicolon. also the author is trying to say that (it can be clearly seen )That pollution harms the environment......but(semicolon)......does the situation need immediate govt action??? (this is debatable)
parallelism -: That pollution harms and that the situation merits

hope this helps a bit!
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