With the advent of papyrus, an early form of paper, civilizations could keep records and transmit information at a faster rate much better than with stone tablets.
(A)
much better than with
(B)
than
(C)
than with
(D)
speed than with
(E)
compared to
Just another sentence correction problem
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IMO C
a -> Much better is redundant
b/e -> compares tablet with 'keep records & transmit at a faster rate' instead of Paper
d -> faster rate speed doesn't make sense !
a -> Much better is redundant
b/e -> compares tablet with 'keep records & transmit at a faster rate' instead of Paper
d -> faster rate speed doesn't make sense !
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IMO C
A) faster-much-better ---> redundant
B) comparing "records and transmit information" Vs "stone tablets". (wrong comparison)
D)faster implies speed. (use of word "speed" is redundant)
E) comparing "records and transmit information" Vs "stone tablets". (wrong comparison)
A) faster-much-better ---> redundant
B) comparing "records and transmit information" Vs "stone tablets". (wrong comparison)
D)faster implies speed. (use of word "speed" is redundant)
E) comparing "records and transmit information" Vs "stone tablets". (wrong comparison)
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IMO C
With the advent of papyrus, an early form of paper, civilizations could keep records and transmit information at a faster rate than transmit information with stone tablets.
With the advent of papyrus, an early form of paper, civilizations could keep records and transmit information at a faster rate than transmit information with stone tablets.
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