Just another sentence correction problem

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Just another sentence correction problem

by rohitmanglik » Tue May 31, 2011 12:39 pm
With the advent of papyrus, an early form of paper, civilizations could keep records and transmit information at a faster rate much better than with stone tablets.
(A)
much better than with
(B)
than
(C)
than with
(D)
speed than with
(E)
compared to

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by galaxian » Tue May 31, 2011 12:54 pm
IMO C

a -> Much better is redundant
b/e -> compares tablet with 'keep records & transmit at a faster rate' instead of Paper
d -> faster rate speed doesn't make sense !

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by Ozlemg » Tue May 31, 2011 1:55 pm
IMO C for the same reasons

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by itsmebharat » Thu Jun 02, 2011 12:23 am
IMO C
I am not an Expert, please feel free to suggest if there is an error.

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by smackmartine » Thu Jun 02, 2011 12:39 am
IMO C

A) faster-much-better ---> redundant
B) comparing "records and transmit information" Vs "stone tablets". (wrong comparison)
D)faster implies speed. (use of word "speed" is redundant)
E) comparing "records and transmit information" Vs "stone tablets". (wrong comparison)

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by cans » Thu Jun 02, 2011 1:41 am
imo C

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by MURALIDHARGAJULA » Thu Jun 02, 2011 2:49 am
IMO C

With the advent of papyrus, an early form of paper, civilizations could keep records and transmit information at a faster rate than transmit information with stone tablets.

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by ansh.kumar » Thu Jun 02, 2011 4:26 am
"c" is the best here.
"b" creates ambiguity

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by aftableo2006 » Thu Jun 02, 2011 4:37 am
this is a tricky question C is the best choice here i suppose

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by subhashghosh » Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:22 am
The answer is C.