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To address essay topics such as
1) One thing people might not know about you
2) Describe a time you took responsibility to achieve an objective

I took an initiative to get into better shape, thru exercising and healthy diet I was able to lose 40-45 lbs in less than a year and have kept the weight off for a year and half

Is this an appropriate topic? I figure adcom gets bored reading all those business strategy/decision essays