The greatest road system built in the Americas prior to the arrival of Christopher Columbus was the Incan highway, which, over 2,500 miles long and extending from northern Ecuador through Peru to Southern Chile.
A. Columbus was the Incan highway, which, over 2,500 miles long and extending
B. Columbus was the Incan highway, over 2,500 miles in length, and extended
C. Columbus, the Incan highway, which was over 2,500 miles in length and extended
D. Columbus, the Incan highway, being over 2,500 miles in length, was extended
E. Columbus, the Incan highway was over 2,500 miles long, extending
OA: Spoiler Code E
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"The greatest road system built in the Americas prior to the arrival of Christopher"- appositive of Incan highway
the Incan highway was over 2,500 miles long, extending (participle modifying the noun Incan highway)is correct
(E)
the Incan highway was over 2,500 miles long, extending (participle modifying the noun Incan highway)is correct
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most definitely Eshowbu wrote:The greatest road system built in the Americas prior to the arrival of Christopher Columbus was the Incan highway, which, over 2,500 miles long and extending from northern Ecuador through Peru to Southern Chile.
A. Columbus was the Incan highway, which, over 2,500 miles long and extending
B. Columbus was the Incan highway, over 2,500 miles in length, and extended
C. Columbus, the Incan highway, which was over 2,500 miles in length and extended
D. Columbus, the Incan highway, being over 2,500 miles in length, was extended
E. Columbus, the Incan highway was over 2,500 miles long, extending
OA: Spoiler Code E
A, B are saying Christopher Columbus was road
C - which is non essential pronoun here
D - wordy
Hi Ron,
in this context, whether "Ican Highway extends from....to...." and "Ican Highway was extended from ....to...." both are right? we pick E just because D has "being".
I mean, talking about highway, "extend" is more used in "passive voice" or "active voice" ?
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in this context, whether "Ican Highway extends from....to...." and "Ican Highway was extended from ....to...." both are right? we pick E just because D has "being".
I mean, talking about highway, "extend" is more used in "passive voice" or "active voice" ?
Thank you!
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as in the case of any other choice between the active and passive voices, you must think about meaning. either of those two usages could be legitimate, but any particular sentence will probably provide enough context to narrow the choice down to just one of the two.Kajiabeat wrote:Hi Ron,
in this context, whether "Ican Highway extends from....to...." and "Ican Highway was extended from ....to...." both are right? we pick E just because D has "being".
I mean, talking about highway, "extend" is more used in "passive voice" or "active voice" ?
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* if you are just describing the range or span of something, then you say that it extends (active voice) over whatever range or span. this usage doesn't take an object.
Interstate 95 extends from Maine to Florida.
* if the subject is a person who is actually extending something, or an event that contributes extra length to something, then PERSON/EVENT extends X -- an active construction with an object.
The Bulldogs' victory in today's game extends their winning streak to 16 games.
The professor decided to extend his office hours during the week before final exams.
* if you are just describing the thing that was extended, then you use the passive voice.
Highway 85 ended in Cupertino before it was extended through Saratoga and southern San Jose.
the sentence at hand is just discussing the extent of the highway -- it doesn't mention any specific projects or efforts by which the highway was extended beyond its original length -- so the active voice is the only usage that makes sense in this problem.
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Hi Ron ,
The last example that you gave
In this example , the subjected is being extended through Saratoga and southern San Jose.
and the subject is Highway 85
The sc under consideration is also talking about a highway .
why isnt the same case applicable to the SC
The last example that you gave
is similar to the sc in question .Highway 85 ended in Cupertino before it was extended through Saratoga and southern San Jose.
In this example , the subjected is being extended through Saratoga and southern San Jose.
and the subject is Highway 85
The sc under consideration is also talking about a highway .
why isnt the same case applicable to the SC
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Can someone please explain why the option A is wrong.
It definitely is not wrong because it seems that Christopher Columbus was road . Or is it?
I can see that there is something wrong with sentence after the word "Which". I do not see any verb
But can someone please explain it?
It definitely is not wrong because it seems that Christopher Columbus was road . Or is it?
I can see that there is something wrong with sentence after the word "Which". I do not see any verb
But can someone please explain it?
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which is a subordinating conjunction and used to introduce a clause . The which in option A doesnt precede a verbashutoshkumar7 wrote:Can someone please explain why the option A is wrong.
It definitely is not wrong because it seems that Christopher Columbus was road . Or is it?
I can see that there is something wrong with sentence after the word "Which". I do not see any verb
But can someone please explain it?
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this example isn't applicable because the meaning is completely different. (in fact, the point of this example was to contrast it with the example in the thread.)mundasingh123 wrote:Hi Ron ,
The last example that you gaveis similar to the sc in question .Highway 85 ended in Cupertino before it was extended through Saratoga and southern San Jose.
In this example , the subjected is being extended through Saratoga and southern San Jose.
and the subject is Highway 85
The sc under consideration is also talking about a highway .
why isnt the same case applicable to the SC
in this example, the highway actually was extended, i.e., lengthened/expanded. that is not the meaning of the original sentence. try inserting "lengthened" or "expanded" into the original; it will make no sense.
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the lack of a verb -- which you've correctly identified -- is the only error in that answer choice.ashutoshkumar7 wrote:Can someone please explain why the option A is wrong.
It definitely is not wrong because it seems that Christopher Columbus was road . Or is it?
I can see that there is something wrong with sentence after the word "Which". I do not see any verb
But can someone please explain it?
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(c) is not a sentence -- it doesn't have a main verb.crisro wrote:Can somebody explain why option C is wrong?
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it consists only of "the incan highway", preceded and followed by modifiers.
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