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by BTGmoderatorDC » Sun May 27, 2018 1:03 pm

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Home security is blossoming for toy makers that can match the technical power and flexibility of the computer industry and the mass-market prices that come from large production runs.

A. that can match the technical power and flexibility of the computer industry and the mass-market prices that come from
B. who can match the technical power and flexibility of the computer industry with the mass-market prices that comes from
C. that can match the technical power and flexibility in the computer industry as well as the mass-market prices which come from
D. who can match the technical power and flexibility of the computer industry with the mass-market prices that come from
E. that can match the technical power and flexibility of the computer industry and the mass-market prices that comes from
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by deloitte247 » Sat Jun 02, 2018 9:13 am
Option A: Wrong
The statement is filled with less productive words copied from the question without proper analysis and dissection. It amounts to nothing if we cant get anything from something.

Option B: Right
With the direct replacement of demonstrative pronoun "that" with "who" which is more fitting and contextually more sensible to the statement than the former. It also has the continuous form of a verb "come" which is "comes" which means it's in the long term.

Option C: Wrong
The statement in this option agrees well with one another. Nevertheless, it lacks the continuity condition expected of the verb "come". would have been entirely correct but for shortcoming.

Option D: Wrong
Same grammatical and lexico-structural problems is encountered here again. The tense agreement is lacking here and lacks conformity with the original subject.

Option E: Wrong
This is although a sane rearrangement, it is nonetheless not enough to qualify it for the threshold set for such arrangements. Correct but not the best of all the options.
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