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by BTGmoderatorDC » Tue Jun 12, 2018 2:14 pm

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High in the sky, soaring over the foothills that on hot, dry days look like brushed brown suede, the condor attains a majesty that is rare among birds in flight.

A. High in the sky, soaring over the foothills that on hot, dry days look like brushed brown suede, the condor attains a majesty that is rare among birds in flight

B. The condor, being high in the sky and soaring over foothills that on hot, dry days look like brushed brown suede, attains a rare majesty among birds in flight

C. The condor, when it is high in the sky and soars over the foothills that on hot dry days look as if they might be brushed dry suede, attains a majesty that is rare among birds in flight

D. On hot, dry days, when the foothills look like brushed brown suede and the condor, high in the sky, soars over them, it attains a majesty that is rare among birds in flight

E. Attaining a majesty that is rare among birds in flight, high in the sky, the condor soars over foothills that look like brushed brown suede on hot, dry days
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by deloitte247 » Sun Jun 17, 2018 12:30 pm
In Option A - INCORRECT.
Here, this statement is clearly non-defining, misdirectional and confusing because it does not offer substantial evidence to show cause why it should be a legitimate point of mention in the choices available.

In Option B - INCORRECT.
Here, the sentence construction is subpar in meaning with a multidimensional meaning to yet a straightforward question. There's just one thing responsible, punctuation defects.

In Option C - INCORRECT.
We have a statement that is grammatically inconsistent as it lacks direction and specificity. Too many lumped up words to form an incoherent sentence.

In Option D - INCORRECT.
Here, two head-words are perceived to be clashing with each other contextually and it offers no desired meaning to the subject at hand. Too many punctuated spacings.

In Option E - CORRECT.
We have a well punctuated, articulated and comprehensible. It is the option that appropriately and brilliantly captured the mind of the writer about the particular write-up.
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