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Re: Gprep - Wines

by iamcste » Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:40 pm
niraj_a wrote:OA A . Please explain what's wrong with B.

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"sales of wines declined in the late 1980's"

Parallels

" They began to grow again after the late 1991"


( Hint from stem...Noun/Pronoun+Increase/decrease of Noun+ prepositional phrase)

secondly,

They began growing again- clause describes "Sales"

Noun modifier must be kept as close as possible to the noun it modifies


so, B has

1. No parallelism

2. Modifier issues

3. growing...was akward to me

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by niraj_a » Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:59 pm
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by pbanavara » Tue Dec 09, 2008 4:37 pm
Also .. in option B "a moderate alcohol consumption" is wrong

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by niraj_a » Tue Dec 09, 2008 4:51 pm
pradeep, i forgot the rule why that is wrong, could you mention it again for me?

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by pbanavara » Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:30 pm
niraj_a wrote:pradeep, i forgot the rule why that is wrong, could you mention it again for me?

thanks!
Am not sure if there's any specific rule but it should be 'moderate alcohol consumption' right ?

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by ronniecoleman » Tue Dec 09, 2008 9:54 pm
neeraj bhai...

zara answers ko remove kar diya karo... :wink:
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by Emad2010 » Mon Dec 28, 2009 10:02 am
why "and" in A is not redundant ?
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by tyronetan82 » Tue Aug 10, 2010 5:45 am
Idiomatic Expression:

Linked to or Linked with?


Which is correct?

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