Municipal governments are beginning to confront the growing pension liabilities; this leads local politicians throughout the country to become increasingly vocal about restraining costs and limiting services.
1)the growing pension liabilities; this leads
2)their growing pension liabilities; leading
3)the growth in their pension liabilities, which leads
4)their growing pension liabilities, leading
5)their growing pension liabilities, that leads
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IMO Dgmatnmein2010 wrote:Municipal governments are beginning to confront the growing pension liabilities; this leads local politicians throughout the country to become increasingly vocal about restraining costs and limiting services.
1)the growing pension liabilities; this leads
begining verb in 1st clause is not llel with leads
2)their growing pension liabilities; leading
semi colon indicates the cluase after it is independent , however leading lacks a sub and refers to the sub of previous clause hence incorrect
3)the growth in their pension liabilities, which leads
verbs of both clause are not llel as in A
4)their growing pension liabilities, leading
correct
5)their growing pension liabilities, that leads
verbs of both clause are not llel as in A