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by Niner710 » Mon Jan 11, 2010 8:12 am
The current economic downturn has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals as well as general consumer magazines, especially if focusing on technology.

A. has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals as well as general consumer magazines, especially if focusing
B. has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals and for general consumer magazines, especially those focusing
C. significantly reduced advertising income for both business journals and for general consumer magazines, especially when focused
D. reduced both business journals' and general consumer magazines' advertising income significantly, especially if focused
E. reduced advertising income significantly for both business journals, as well as for general consumer magazines, especially those focusing

I am wondering if "those" is wrong? It seems like "those" in (B) and (E) could refer to magazines and business journals. Seems ambiguous to me. Is that wrong?
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by viidyasagar » Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:57 am
Niner710 wrote:The current economic downturn has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals as well as general consumer magazines, especially if focusing on technology.

A. has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals as well as general consumer magazines, especially if focusing
B. has significantly reduced advertising income both for business journals and for general consumer magazines, especially those focusing
C. significantly reduced advertising income for both business journals and for general consumer magazines, especially when focused
D. reduced both business journals' and general consumer magazines' advertising income significantly, especially if focused
E. reduced advertising income significantly for both business journals, as well as for general consumer magazines, especially those focusing

I am wondering if "those" is wrong? It seems like "those" in (B) and (E) could refer to magazines and business journals. Seems ambiguous to me. Is that wrong?
A - "both" and "as well as" seem redundant......usage of "if" suggests a cause-effect relationship, which is clearly questionable
C - "for both business journals" - changes meaning by introducing 2 business journals out of nowhere.........."especially when focused" suggests a cause-effect relationship unnecessarily
D - I always prefer adverb "significantly" and verb "reduced" placed together; i don't like this divorce......"both business" must be interspersed by a preposition "for", else meaning changes
E -.....incorrect placement of preposition "for", "as well as" is redundant.......

B seems best, uses preposition "for" correctly, maintains parallelism, adverb-verb are happily married....my award goes to B for Ball
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by viidyasagar » Tue Jan 12, 2010 6:27 am
OA with spoiler please :-)
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