Anyone out there with good english knowledge that would like to critique my essay?
I'll be forever greatful. It might give others out there some help as well on what TO WRITE or NOT TO WRITE. I've been working really hard on it to make it look good but my lack of CREATIVE WRITING skills makes me nervous. Anyone feeback would be great. I can email the essay to anyone with interest.
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