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Q- In some countries, television and radio programs are carefully censored for offensive language and behavior. In other countries, there is little or no censorship

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This is a Media world, where people come to know things from television or radio rather than any other source of information. So it is a very important and sensitive aspect of our society.
Now days most of the youth get inspire by watching movies on television & listening new things on radio because they follow their celebrity styles. Some directors or producers of movie makers are only concerned about profits. They don't bother for delivering wrong messages to the society.
In some countries, television & radio programs are carefully censored for offensive language & behavior. The limits for censoring offensive language & behavior have been decided by some government authorities on the bases of their country's culture.
Such as India, where to censor a program is a very sensitive area. A program Big Boss in India had come in news for showing offensive language & behavior without censored. So government banded that program. The program Big Boss started again after cutting the offensive clips in that serial.
In my opinion programs on television & on radio has been censored on the basis of respect country's culture. Because every country has its own censor limits.