Dr. Kevorkian

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Dr. Kevorkian

by arorag » Wed Sep 02, 2009 5:34 pm
Dr. Kevorkian, the so-called suicide doctor, on November 5 was imprisoned in Wayne County Jail in Detroit for his alleged role in the suicides of two men, and he then began a hunger strike.

A. the so-called suicide doctor, on November 5 was imprisoned in Wayne County Jail in Detroit for
B. the so-called suicide doctor, was imprisoned on November 5 in Wayne County Jail in Detroit for
C. the called so suicide doctor, on November 5 was imprisoned in Wayne County Jail in Detroit for
D. the called so suicide doctor, was imprisoned on November 5 in Wayne County Jail in Detroit for
E. the so-called suicide doctor, on November 5 in Detroit was imprisoned in Wayne County Jail for

Comment on A and B

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by tom4lax » Wed Sep 02, 2009 5:37 pm
I would go with B. Remove the modifier and it doesn't make sense:

Dr. Kevorkian, on November 5 was imprisoned in Wayne County Jail in Detroit for his alleged role in the suicides of two men, and he then began a hunger strike.