In an effort to shorten the time span and cut the costs needed to grow full size beef stock, many ranchers substitute cornmeal and ground bones for their cattle's regular diet, branded by them to become generic-grade beef.
A. for their cattle's regular diet, branded by them
B. for the regular diet of their cattle which have been branded
C. for the regular diet of their cattle, having been branded
D. in place of their cattle's diet, for those of them branded
E. in place of the regular diet of their cattle to have been branded by them
Generally, COMMA + VERBed serves to modify the preceding noun.
In A,
branded seems to modify
diet, implying that the DIET was BRANDED.
Not the intended meaning.
Eliminate A.
Generally, COMMA +
having + VERBed serves to refer to the preceding subject.
In C,
having been branded seems to refer to
many ranchers, implying that MANY RANCHERS have BEEN BRANDED.
Not the intended meaning.
Eliminate C.
In D and E,
substitute and
in place of are redundant.
Eliminate D and E.
The best answer is
B.
aditya8062 wrote:
my doubt: the OA of this question is B. my concern is regarding the usage of "which" in B. can we use "which" as restrictive? is GMAC really changing its stand on the usage of "which"?. recently a friend of mine took GMAT and told me that he encountered a question in which he was forced to pick an answer with "which" as restrictive ( without COMMA). How can we reconcile numerous explanations by OG that have eliminated answer choice on the basis that "which" cannot be used restrictive
The explanation for SC12 in the OG12 reads as follows:
"In (A) and (C),
which introduces a restrictive clause. Some writers follow the convention that
which can only be used for nonrestrictive clauses, but insistence on this rule is controversial, and both (A) and (C) can be rejected on other grounds".
Given this explanation, I would not immediately eliminate an answer choice solely because it employs
which to introduce a restrictive clause.
Instead, I would look for errors that cannot be debated.
In the SC above, A, C, D and E each have a clear error, making B the only viable answer choice.
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