Distilled Alcohal

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Distilled Alcohal

by TheMatrix85 » Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:08 am
As the price of gasoline rises, which makes substituting alcohol distilled from cereal grain attractive , the prices of bread and livestock feed are sure to increase.

1)which makes substituting alcohol distilled from cereal grain attractive
2)which makes substituting the distillation of alcohol from cereal grain attractive
3)which makes distilling alcohol from cereal grain an attractive substitute
4)making an attractive substitution of alcohol distilled from cereal grain
5)making alcohol distilled from cereal grain an attractive substitute

OA is E...BUT why not C ??

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by gmatv09 » Sat Sep 26, 2009 2:23 pm
the price ... rise is making the alcohol an attractive substitute and not 'attractive substitution'

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by umaa » Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:10 pm
Why not D?
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by GMATBootcamp » Sat Sep 26, 2009 8:06 pm
The pronoun "which" introduces a non restrictive clause. The rule states that this clause must modify the noun immediately preceding it.

The use of "which" incorrectly modifies "rises" when it needs to modify the word "price." The correct modifying phrase in this sentence needs to start with the word "making," eliminating choices a, b, and c.

Between D and E, D is in passive voice, so the best answer is E.
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