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by kanha81 » Mon Jun 08, 2009 2:18 pm
On Discovery channel last night they showed an informative program about new innovations in medical imaging, which you would have found interesting.

A. they showed an informative program about new innovations in medical imaging, which you would have found interesting.
B. they showed an informative program about innovations in medical imaging, which you would have found interesting.
C. they showed an informative program about innovations in medical imaging, that you would have found interesting.
D. there was an informative program about new innovations in medical imaging, that you would have found interesting.
E. there was an informative program about innovations in medical imaging, a program you would have found interesting.


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by Domnu » Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:15 pm
I think the answer is E.

Here's why:

[spoiler]Answer choices A, B, C can immediately be eliminated since "they" doesn't refer to anything palpable... the Discovery channel can't show anything... it's the people running the station, etc. who do things like that.

As for D and E, D doesn't express a complete thought. However, E fits together perfectly. So, my final answer would be E.[/spoiler]
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by rahulsaroha » Mon Jun 08, 2009 8:04 pm
yeah "e" should be correct..
new innovations is redundant..eliminate "a" and "d"..
they doesn't have any refferant ..eliminate "b" and"c"
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by hetavdave » Mon Jun 08, 2009 8:58 pm
My best guess is E

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They doesn't refer anyone and between choice D and E, i choose E. D seems wordy and "That you would have found" doesn't seem right to me :)[/spoiler]
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Re: Discovery channel

by real2008 » Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:32 pm
kanha81 wrote:On Discovery channel last night they showed an informative program about new innovations in medical imaging, which you would have found interesting.

A. they showed an informative program about new innovations in medical imaging, which you would have found interesting.
B. they showed an informative program about innovations in medical imaging, which you would have found interesting.
C. they showed an informative program about innovations in medical imaging, that you would have found interesting.
D. there was an informative program about new innovations in medical imaging, that you would have found interesting.
E. there was an informative program about innovations in medical imaging, a program you would have found interesting.


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After ruling out choices a,b,c for using 'they', I rule out d for NEW innovations, as the usage may be redundant.
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Re: Discovery channel

by perfectstranger » Tue Jun 09, 2009 1:25 pm
kanha81 wrote:On Discovery channel last night they showed an informative program about new innovations in medical imaging, which you would have found interesting.

A. they showed an informative program about new innovations in medical imaging, which you would have found interesting. -which has no referrent out, new and innovations have same meaning -
B. they showed an informative program about innovations in medical imaging, which you would have found interesting. -which has no referrent out-
C. they showed an informative program about innovations in medical imaging, that you would have found interesting. - that is not used with comma since it is an essential modifier- Out-
D. there was an informative program about new innovations in medical imaging, that you would have found interesting. that is not used with comma since it is an essential modifier,new and innovations have same meaning - Out-
E. there was an informative program about innovations in medical imaging, a program you would have found interesting.


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IMO

by kc_raj » Tue Jun 09, 2009 4:56 pm
IMO they all have some fault

A, B, C they does not have a reference

D uses new and innovations together i.e not needed

E has two run on sentences, if there was a ; instead of , E would be my choice.
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Re: IMO

by Domnu » Wed Jun 10, 2009 7:43 am
kc_raj wrote:IMO they all have some fault

A, B, C they does not have a reference

D uses new and innovations together i.e not needed

E has two run on sentences, if there was a ; instead of , E would be my choice.
Actually, I don't think that E is a run on sentence..
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