Hi All,
Please tell me if the below sentence is correct.
Credit Card payment can be done after 24 hours of a beneficiary customer being added.
If incorrect , please give me the correct one.
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I think the rule here is 'Keep It Simple & Sweet'.
Credit card payment can be done after 24 hours of adding a beneficiary customer.
I don't feel any need of 'being' here.
Credit card payment can be done after 24 hours of adding a beneficiary customer.
I don't feel any need of 'being' here.
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