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100 points for $49 worth of Veritas practice GMATs FREE VERITAS PRACTICE GMAT EXAMS Earn 10 Points Per Post Earn 10 Points Per Thanks Earn 10 Points Per Upvote ## Constructed with finest italian marble---comparison ##### This topic has 2 expert replies and 15 member replies Goto page • 1, • 2 ## Constructed with finest italian marble---comparison Constructed with the finest italian marble, the floor of the church is its greatest attraction and is more attractive to tourists than are its ornate stained-glass windows. a) attraction and is more attractive to tourists than are its ornate stained-glass windows. b) attraction,itself more attractive to tourists than its ornate stained glass windows. c) attraction,itself more attractive to tourists as are its ornate stained glass windows. d) attraction,being more attractive to tourists than its ornate stained glass windows are e) attraction as it more is attractive to tourists than are the church's stained glass windows. Answer after some discussion ### GMAT/MBA Expert GMAT Instructor Joined 21 Apr 2010 Posted: 509 messages Followed by: 85 members Upvotes: 199 GMAT Score: 750 This is a pronoun question. on the GMAT pronouns cannot be ambiguous and is each of A, B, C and D the "it" coudl refer to the church or the floor. therefore the answer must be E. best of Luck _________________ Becky Master GMAT Instructor The Princeton Review Irvine, CA Free GMAT Practice Test How can you improve your test score if you don't know your baseline score? Take a free online practice exam. Get started on achieving your dream score today! Sign up now. Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts Joined 22 Feb 2011 Posted: 234 messages Followed by: 3 members Upvotes: 5 Even IMO the answer should be E as the option fairly compares the floor of the church to windows of the church. However the answer is mentioned as B. Source:Kaplan GMAT 800 ### GMAT/MBA Expert GMAT Instructor Joined 21 Apr 2010 Posted: 509 messages Followed by: 85 members Upvotes: 199 GMAT Score: 750 if you wanted to compare the floor of the church to the windows of the church you would have to use the same format. you can't say "floor of the church" and "the church's stained glass windows" that is not parallel. _________________ Becky Master GMAT Instructor The Princeton Review Irvine, CA Free GMAT Practice Test How can you improve your test score if you don't know your baseline score? Take a free online practice exam. Get started on achieving your dream score today! Sign up now. Legendary Member Joined 25 Aug 2010 Posted: 857 messages Followed by: 15 members Upvotes: 56 tpr-becky wrote: if you wanted to compare the floor of the church to the windows of the church you would have to use the same format. you can't say "floor of the church" and "the church's stained glass windows" that is not parallel. Totally agree with Becky . IMO E too. _________________ Thanks & Regards, AIM GMAT Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts Joined 22 Feb 2011 Posted: 234 messages Followed by: 3 members Upvotes: 5 Thanks Becky...it helped. Senior | Next Rank: 100 Posts Joined 04 Nov 2009 Posted: 38 messages Upvotes: 1 Hi everybody, can expert come and help me on choice E construction?? The choice skeleton is strange for me and I can NOT undrstand what elements are being compared together!!! Your nice help would be appreciated. Legendary Member Joined 26 Feb 2011 Posted: 1112 messages Followed by: 49 members Upvotes: 77 tpr-becky wrote: if you wanted to compare the floor of the church to the windows of the church you would have to use the same format. you can't say "floor of the church" and "the church's stained glass windows" that is not parallel. Please clear, according to your above post Op E is also WRONG Op E-->it(floor of the church) more is attractive to tourists than are the church's stained glass windows. Legendary Member Joined 24 Feb 2010 Posted: 1083 messages Followed by: 14 members Upvotes: 127 Constructed with the finest italian marble, the floor of the church is its greatest attraction and is more attractive to tourists than are its ornate stained-glass windows. a) attraction and is more attractive to tourists than are its ornate stained-glass windows. b) attraction,itself more attractive to tourists than its ornate stained glass windows. c) attraction,itself more attractive to tourists as are its ornate stained glass windows. d) attraction,being more attractive to tourists than its ornate stained glass windows are e) attraction as it more is attractive to tourists than are the church's stained glass windows. The skeleton of the sentence: The floor is its greatest attraction and is more attractive than are its windows. --> I don't find any error in this sentence. C and D are wrong. If we follow B: The floor is its greatest attraction, itself more attractive than its windows. --> What role does "COMMA + Itself more attractive than its windows"? I don't get it. I eliminate it. In option E, "more is attractive" is awkward. I like A. Thanks. Legendary Member Joined 30 Nov 2009 Posted: 768 messages Followed by: 7 members Upvotes: 21 What role does "COMMA + Itself more attractive than its windows"? This is an absolute phrase.Howevern pronoun is certainly an issue here. 'floor of the church' is subject and then author uses 'it' to refer to church ; you infer so based on meaning of course. Any Kaplan expert ? or any other expert please ? @GMAT perfect: A is wrong because of inappropriate use of 'and' E has typo error i suppose.@Original poster could you confirm please. Legendary Member Joined 19 Jan 2010 Posted: 586 messages Followed by: 5 members Upvotes: 31 Test Date: 27th July 2011 GMAT Score: 730 see reply from Tani - Kaplan expert http://www.beatthegmat.com/confusing-usage-of-its-t73754.html according to her, it shud be A (best of worst) Master | Next Rank: 500 Posts Joined 26 Jan 2011 Posted: 165 messages Followed by: 1 members Upvotes: 16 Target GMAT Score: 750 I came up with answer choice B. The idiom is, MORE X THAN Y where, X and Y must be parallel. A. more attractive to tourists than are its ornate stained-glass windows First part is a phrase, 2nd is a fragment. C. C is wrong because it uses MORE ... AS D. May be correct, but uses being .. it is wrong in GMAT. E. Same as A Experts, please comment. Also, about the pronoun-antecedent issue, it is not always an issue if meaning is clear(there is a great post of Ron about this, don't have the reference right now) _________________ 78 clicks can change my life ! Legendary Member Joined 19 Jan 2010 Posted: 586 messages Followed by: 5 members Upvotes: 31 Test Date: 27th July 2011 GMAT Score: 730 tetura84 wrote: I came up with answer choice B. The idiom is, MORE X THAN Y where, X and Y must be parallel. A. more attractive to tourists than are its ornate stained-glass windows First part is a phrase, 2nd is a fragment. C. C is wrong because it uses MORE ... AS D. May be correct, but uses being .. it is wrong in GMAT. E. Same as A Experts, please comment. Also, about the pronoun-antecedent issue, it is not always an issue if meaning is clear(there is a great post of Ron about this, don't have the reference right now) im not an expert but i take the leeway to comment. i agree wth you, pronoun ambiguity shud can be ignored if the meanign is clear, but if u look closely at option B, we do have a clear meaning error. i will better put it in Ron's words: "none of the choices here are correct. (b) is intended as the correct answer, but it contains a flagrant pronoun error (which causes the sentence to say that the floor itself has windows in it)." http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/difficult-sentence-correction-question-t7627.html Legendary Member Joined 25 Aug 2010 Posted: 857 messages Followed by: 15 members Upvotes: 56 Now i am really confused , Adam says that its ok it the sentence conveys the meaning and there is no other possible way , floor cant have windows so certainly its about church . But now as rohu quotes about Ron's approach . What is to be followed ? _________________ Thanks & Regards, AIM GMAT Legendary Member Joined 19 Jan 2010 Posted: 586 messages Followed by: 5 members Upvotes: 31 Test Date: 27th July 2011 GMAT Score: 730 AIM GMAT wrote: Now i am really confused , Adam says that its ok it the sentence conveys the meaning and there is no other possible way , floor cant have windows so certainly its about church . But now as rohu quotes about Ron's approach . What is to be followed ? I am in the same boat AIM but still let me try if can clear somethng here. option B itself - refers to floor of the church, and then the next its refers to church - dont we have an error here, same pronoun refering to 2 diff antecendents. option A - we only have its and wth the help of meaning we can relate it to church. option E would have been a better choice if not for as it more is - whtever tht means? or is it a typo? hope i didnt confuse u more. may be the original poster can give OE or may be we can consider this a not so good question and ignore • 5-Day Free Trial 5-day free, full-access trial TTP Quant Available with Beat the GMAT members only code • Get 300+ Practice Questions 25 Video lessons and 6 Webinars for FREE Available with Beat the GMAT members only code • Free Veritas GMAT Class Experience Lesson 1 Live Free Available with Beat the GMAT members only code • Award-winning private GMAT tutoring Register now and save up to$200

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