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Post Tue Mar 27, 2012 1:01 am
Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A. Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B. Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C. Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D. Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds
E. Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes

Please explain your choice.

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Post Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:26 am
sam2304 wrote:
Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
A. Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B. Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C. Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D. Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds
E. Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes

Please explain your choice.
Inappropriate comparison btn MAMMALS and TUBES in C & D - drop them
E - its would have been better to have THE TUBES after comma to make the comparison btn TINY TUBES...TUBES clear; WHICH could refer to BONE CELLS, making the meaning non-sensical
B - apart of the issue of not placing TINY TUBES and TUBES in parallel position, the 2nd clause BIRDS HAVE TUBES...convey a state while the first clause (TINY TUBES..ARE ARRAYED) convey an action; Use of THAT ARE ...makes the sentence wordier as well

IMO A
The use of WHEREAS...makes it as a dependent clause (just as THOUGH/ALTHOUGH)

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Post Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:02 am
sam2304 wrote:
Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.

A. Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B. Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C. Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D. Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds
E. Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes

Please explain your choice.
IMO: A as well, but is usage of whereas correct?

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Post Tue Mar 27, 2012 1:55 am
A should be for correct comparison.

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