The Tournament of Roses Parade, the highest rated among televised parades worldwide, a celebration in which creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses come together, moving in a procession down South Orange Grove Boulevard and Sierra Madre Boulevard.
worldwide, a celebration in which creatively decorated
floats, marching bands, and horses come together, moving
in a procession
worldwide, it is a celebration where creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses are coming together
to move in a procession
worldwide and a celebration in which creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses come together, move in
a procession
worldwide, is a celebration in which creatively decorated
floats, marching bands, and horses come together to move
in a procession
worldwide, is a celebration in which creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses are collaborating, it moves in a procession
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Over here, E apparently has a comma splice: but i was wondering whether it would be right even if we correct the comma spice by putting in a FANBOYS word.
"a celebration in which creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses are collaborating"
Shouldn't this be "a celebration in which creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses collaborate"?....Just felt that Collaborating changes the meaning and tense of the whole sentence..like the horses , bands and floats are currently collaborating as compared to something that usually happens in general...
Any help would be appreciated
Regards,
aJ
worldwide, a celebration in which creatively decorated
floats, marching bands, and horses come together, moving
in a procession
worldwide, it is a celebration where creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses are coming together
to move in a procession
worldwide and a celebration in which creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses come together, move in
a procession
worldwide, is a celebration in which creatively decorated
floats, marching bands, and horses come together to move
in a procession
worldwide, is a celebration in which creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses are collaborating, it moves in a procession
P.S: This is a question from KNEWTON PREP:
D
Over here, E apparently has a comma splice: but i was wondering whether it would be right even if we correct the comma spice by putting in a FANBOYS word.
"a celebration in which creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses are collaborating"
Shouldn't this be "a celebration in which creatively decorated floats, marching bands, and horses collaborate"?....Just felt that Collaborating changes the meaning and tense of the whole sentence..like the horses , bands and floats are currently collaborating as compared to something that usually happens in general...
Any help would be appreciated
Regards,
aJ
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