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by hemant_rajput » Sun Sep 01, 2013 10:14 am
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[spoiler]Is option A is incorrect because we need a doer right after the comma and all we have here is the Noun - discipline?

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by Java_85 » Sun Sep 01, 2013 10:51 am
I chose A too and don't know why it's not right!
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by vinay1983 » Sun Sep 01, 2013 9:26 pm
I think it is Option B. Some 3/2 splits available in the options. "In order to achieve" is preferable to "is required while growing"

So E and D are out.Also by POE

E is out since in order to is used twice and is clumsy
D usage of In order to,also while going business is not the proper form of usage.

C uses required and in order too together, it is not correct usage, both almost similar meaning"want or need"

Now A and B.

Who needs discipline?Answer to this and the option is clear.

Which is correct?
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To check the patient's heartbeat, the doctor uses stethoscope.

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by sana.noor » Mon Sep 02, 2013 5:14 am
B is the winner
who need discipline must be mentioned in it and B is the only candidate using 'One"
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by faraz_jeddah » Mon Sep 02, 2013 11:01 am
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by [email protected] » Mon Sep 02, 2013 2:35 pm
Hi All,

The simple answer to why B is correct is that this sentence needs a *subject*. In essence, "someone" or "something" needs to have discipline, but the original prompt doesn't give us that subject. Answer B does though, and since it's the only answer that solves this problem, it's the correct one.

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