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by gmatblood » Thu Nov 03, 2011 12:02 am
Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it with nothing but a handheld lance, as Dorset people did, required exceptional hunting skill.

A. so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
B. so to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
C. so in order to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
D. and so in order to stalk it over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
E. and so stalking them over the treeless landscape and getting close enough in order to kill it

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by GmatKiss » Thu Nov 03, 2011 12:15 am
Between A and B

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by HSPA » Thu Nov 03, 2011 4:10 am
B it is.

A uses them/it... so there is a plural/singluar conflict in A
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by studentps2011 » Thu Nov 03, 2011 8:20 am
Is the answer E. Doesn't the sentence require 'and' after the comma?

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by sam2304 » Thu Nov 03, 2011 8:35 am
IMO B.
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by aspirant2011 » Thu Nov 03, 2011 8:45 am
gmatblood wrote:Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it with nothing but a handheld lance, as Dorset people did, required exceptional hunting skill.

A. so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
B. so to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
C. so in order to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
D. and so in order to stalk it over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
E. and so stalking them over the treeless landscape and getting close enough in order to kill it
Yup A uses singular it & is therefore wrong.......

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by studentps2011 » Thu Nov 03, 2011 9:33 am
What is the OA?

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by mankey » Thu Nov 03, 2011 9:46 am
To me it looks like "B", in all others there are singular/plural issue.

What is the OA?

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by mankey » Sun Nov 06, 2011 3:27 am
Please provide OA.

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by queenisabella » Sun Apr 01, 2012 12:18 pm
The OA is B. Can someone please explain why the OA is not E? Thanks.

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by patanjali.purpose » Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:22 pm
queenisabella wrote:The OA is B. Can someone please explain why the OA is not E? Thanks.
Caribou are wary animals with excellent hearing, so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it with nothing but a handheld lance, as Dorset people did, required exceptional hunting skill.

A. so stalking them over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
B. so to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
C. so in order to stalk them over the treeless landscape and get close enough to kill one
D. and so in order to stalk it over the treeless landscape, getting close enough to kill it
E. and so stalking them over the treeless landscape and getting close enough in order to kill it
Issues with E:
1) use of IT - what does IT refers to?
2) no comma before and after SO (comma is required to show that SO is acting as an interrupter
3) use of IN ORDER TO is wordier than using just TO

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by Bill@VeritasPrep » Sun Apr 01, 2012 3:06 pm
In addition to what patanjali.purpose said, "so" is a better connector than "and so" in this instance.
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