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Now even directors of off- Broadway productions, desperate for actors who are
talented, charismatic, and aspiring more to a solid career in the theater than to the
lucrative rewards and stardom proffered by movie moguls and studios, are turning to
independent casting directors for guidance in assembling their casts.

A. are talented, charismatic, and aspiring
B. are talented, who have charisma, and who are aspiring
C. have talent and are charismatic and aspire
D. are talented and have charisma, and whose aspirations are
E. are talented and charismatic, and who aspire

OA after few replies

I will go with E. parallelism

actors who are.....talented and charismatic......and who aspire.....

+1 for E

GmatKiss wrote:Now even directors of off- Broadway productions, desperate for actors who are
talented, charismatic, and aspiring more to a solid career in the theater than to the
lucrative rewards and stardom proffered by movie moguls and studios, are turning to
independent casting directors for guidance in assembling their casts.

A. are talented, charismatic, and aspiring
B. are talented, who have charisma, and who are aspiring
C. have talent and are charismatic and aspire
D. are talented and have charisma, and whose aspirations are
E. are talented and charismatic, and who aspire

OA after few replies

isnt aspiring ... a present participle . i thoughts present particples could be put in parallel to adjectives

OA is E

GmatKiss wrote:OA is E

The source is doubtful . A seems to be appropriate as well

mundasingh123 wrote:

GmatKiss wrote:OA is E

The source is doubtful . A seems to be appropriate as well

A is missing 'and'

saketk wrote:

mundasingh123 wrote:

GmatKiss wrote:OA is E

The source is doubtful . A seems to be appropriate as well

A is missing 'and'

You are not seeing what i am seeing

E is correct.
and for parallelism.
the comma between two clause and the 'and' is properly used.