The most chance of being an isomniac is not the overworked executive or the student overwhelmed by the studies but the bored housewife who feels unfulfilled.
a) The most chance of being an isomniac is not the overworked executive or the student overwhelmed by the studies but the bored housewife who feels unfulfilled.
b) The highest degree of isomnia is not experienced by the overworked executive nor by the student overwhelmed by studies but by the bored housewife who feels unfulfilled.
c) Most isomniacs are not overworked executives or students overwhelmed by studies, yet they are bored housewives who feels unfulfilled.
d) The greater degree of isomniacs are bored housewives who feel unfulfilled and not overworked executives nor are they students overwhelmed by studies.
e) Isomniacs are, for the most part, bored housewives who feel unfulfilled, not overworked executives or students overwhelmed by their studies.
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b) The highest degree of isomnia is not experienced by the overworked executive nor by the student overwhelmed by studies but by the bored housewife who feels unfulfilled.
IMO B
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IMO B
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Yes, but this is the one which is think is grammatically correctvisjain wrote:@nervesofsteel
Doesn't (b) change the meaning of the sentence?
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IMO E
A-the most chance ....is not the overworked executive does not make sense
B-the highest degree of insomnia, changes the original sentence that talks about chance of someone getting insomnia with degree of insomnia.
C yet is used for contradiction, in this sentence no contradication is present.
D the greater degree of insomniacs is meaning less it should be the greater degree of insomnia
E is correct by POE, it is the best choice
A-the most chance ....is not the overworked executive does not make sense
B-the highest degree of insomnia, changes the original sentence that talks about chance of someone getting insomnia with degree of insomnia.
C yet is used for contradiction, in this sentence no contradication is present.
D the greater degree of insomniacs is meaning less it should be the greater degree of insomnia
E is correct by POE, it is the best choice
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my pick is (C)....yet is justified because the case is reversed for housewives...
(E).."for the most part" is confusing... part of what????
(E).."for the most part" is confusing... part of what????
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c) Most isomniacs are not overworked executives or students overwhelmed by studies, yet they are bored housewives who feels unfulfilled.
Isn't there a subject verb error in C..
Whats the OA...??
IMO B..
Though it changes the meaning...
Isn't there a subject verb error in C..
Whats the OA...??
IMO B..
Though it changes the meaning...
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A - The most chance - not idiomaticvisjain wrote:The most chance of being an isomniac is not the overworked executive or the student overwhelmed by the studies but the bored housewife who feels unfulfilled.
a) The most chance of being an isomniac is not the overworked executive or the student overwhelmed by the studies but the bored housewife who feels unfulfilled.
b) The highest degree of isomnia is not experienced by the overworked executive nor by the student overwhelmed by studies but by the bored housewife who feels unfulfilled.
c) Most isomniacs are not overworked executives or students overwhelmed by studies, yet they are bored housewives who feels unfulfilled.
d) The greater degree of isomniacs are bored housewives who feel unfulfilled and not overworked executives nor are they students overwhelmed by studies.
e) Isomniacs are, for the most part, bored housewives who feel unfulfilled, not overworked executives or students overwhelmed by their studies.
B - The highest degree - changes meaning
C - Yet they are - Changes meaning
D - Greater degree - not idiomatic, unclear
E - Nothing wrong with it. Maybe a concision issiue at most.
IMO E.