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by bubbliiiiiiii » Tue Apr 19, 2011 8:07 am
Some bat caves, like honeybee caves, have residents that take on different duties such as defending the entrance, acting as sentinels and to sound a warning at the approach of danger, and scouting outside the cave for new food and roosting sites.

(A) acting as sentinels and to sound
(B) acting as sentinels and sounding
(C) to act as sentinels and sound
(D) to act as sentinels and to sound
(E) to act as sentinel sounding


[spoiler]IMO D; OA Later.[/spoiler]

My approach is:

Some bat caves, like honeybee caves, have residents that take on different duties such as [Idiom - such as X and Y] defending the entrance, acting as sentinels and to sound a warning at the approach of danger, and scouting outside the cave for new food and roosting sites.

I am treating acting as sentinels and to sound as a subordinate clause because all options include an 'and' and the non underlined portion also has and. Since, there can be only one and used in a list separated by commas, I felt to act as sentinels and to sound must be parallel to each other.

Please suggest your opinion guys.
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by pemdas » Tue Apr 19, 2011 8:34 am
here choice B seems correct, as parallelism issue is involved - all parallel expressions must be put in gerund (participle I) form
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by AIM GMAT » Tue Apr 19, 2011 9:53 am
bubbliiiiiiii wrote:Some bat caves, like honeybee caves, have residents that take on different duties such as defending the entrance, acting as sentinels and to sound a warning at the approach of danger, and scouting outside the cave for new food and roosting sites.

(A) acting as sentinels and to sound
(B) acting as sentinels and sounding
(C) to act as sentinels and sound
(D) to act as sentinels and to sound
(E) to act as sentinel sounding
defending || acting || sounding -- > So that eliminates C, D and E.
IMO B.
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by bubbliiiiiiii » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:02 am
Guys OA is B.

But and I understand the parallellism maintained here.

what is bothering me is, how can we use two ands while representing the same list.

As per my understanding, and is used as an indicator that the next element in the list would be the last one. Considering this, how can a single list use two ands?

Please help me understand.
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by AIM GMAT » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:16 am
bubbliiiiiiii wrote:Guys OA is B.

But and I understand the parallellism maintained here.

what is bothering me is, how can we use two ands while representing the same list.

As per my understanding, and is used as an indicator that the next element in the list would be the last one. Considering this, how can a single list use two ands?

Please help me understand.
I would give you an analogy to understand . Consider it as a nested loop .

Some bat caves, like honeybee caves, have residents that take on different duties such as defending the entrance, acting as sentinels and sounding a warning at the approach of danger, and scouting outside the cave for new food and roosting sites.
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by mundasingh123 » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:50 am
hi bubblii ,
acting as sentinels and sounding a warning at the approach of danger,
is 1 single item here in this sc.
the sc mentions sounding a warning to describe the duty of the sentinel
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by bubbliiiiiiii » Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:34 pm
Thanks guys .. !!

@AIM GMAT: Truly software guy .. Nested loop :) which platform C/C++/Java??
(Adverb)+(Adjective)+(Noun) .. [actually after posting this, I remembered about some post which targeted seeming and seemingly .. !! ] ;)

Can you also suggest me how to change account name?? :D :P
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by AIM GMAT » Tue Apr 19, 2011 11:04 pm
bubbliiiiiiii wrote:Thanks guys .. !!

@AIM GMAT: Truly software guy .. Nested loop :) which platform C/C++/Java??
(Adverb)+(Adjective)+(Noun) .. [actually after posting this, I remembered about some post which targeted seeming and seemingly .. !! ] ;)

Can you also suggest me how to change account name?? :D :P
Yeah you are right , we got to solve many questions lately on this concept . I checked out the account settings , unfortunately username is not editable field , even i was wondering to change the username , i guess admin might be able to help in this case.
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by atulmangal » Tue Apr 19, 2011 11:10 pm
One quick trick...

I read somewhere, COMMA + INFINITIVE is almost always wrong...the reason was i guess some issue related to meaning...didn't remember that now, but in almost all the questions i have seen so far this thing worked...


U can eliminate C,D,E in one go

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by AIM GMAT » Wed Apr 20, 2011 3:18 am
One more question on somewhat similar lines :-

Displays of the aurora borealis, or "northern lights," can heat the atmosphere over the arctic enough to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induce electric currents that can cause blackouts in some areas and corrosion in north-south pipelines.

(A) to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induce
(B) that the trajectories of ballistic missiles are affected, induce
(C) that it affects the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induces
(D) that the trajectories of ballistic missiles are affected and induces
(E) to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles and induce
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by HSPA » Wed Apr 20, 2011 3:28 am
X can heat sky causing Y and Z.

Y - missile trajectory
Z - blackout of power supply
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by bubbliiiiiiii » Wed Apr 20, 2011 3:40 am
IMO,

Displays of the aurora borealis, or "northern lights," can X and Y that can cause A and B.

X = heat the atmosphere over the arctic enough to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles
Y = induce
electric currents
A = blackouts in some areas
B = corrosion in north-south pipelines
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by HSPA » Wed Apr 20, 2011 3:46 am
bubbliiiiiiii wrote:IMO,

Displays of the aurora borealis, or "northern lights," can X and Y that can cause A and B.

X = heat the atmosphere over the arctic enough to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles
Y = induce
electric currents
A = blackouts in some areas
B = corrosion in north-south pipelines
To what is this pronoun 'that' refering to?
First take: 640 (50M, 27V) - RC needs 300% improvement
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by bubbliiiiiiii » Wed Apr 20, 2011 3:52 am
HSPA wrote:
bubbliiiiiiii wrote:IMO,

Displays of the aurora borealis, or "northern lights," can X and Y that can cause A and B.

X = heat the atmosphere over the arctic enough to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles
Y = induce
electric currents
A = blackouts in some areas
B = corrosion in north-south pipelines
To what is this pronoun 'that' refering to?
electric currents
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by atulmangal » Wed Apr 20, 2011 4:08 am
IMO E

Good question

first of all, I believe that its the heated atmosphere which

1) affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles,

2) and induce electric currents

(A) to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induce --> Induce i believe modify missiles suggesting missiles induce electric current
(B) that the trajectories of ballistic missiles are affected, induce --> means the affected trajectories of ballistic missiles induce electric current
(C) that it affects the trajectories of ballistic missiles, induces----> imply wrong meaning
(D) that the trajectories of ballistic missiles are affected and induces ---> suggests the trajectories induces electric current
(E) to affect the trajectories of ballistic missiles and (to)induce---> correct

Though there are other errors too like parallelism and sub-verb agreement but i thought to point out only the meaning based approach, now a days m working on this approach a lot...