Sentence Correction

Hi,

The answer is D) but it's confusing to me... can anyone give me a tip to find a correct one for this?


207. Charlotte Perkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.
(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities
(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities
(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included

Hi
in the question (...called for appartments houses including child care facilities) could mean that Child care facilities are type of appt houses...
but in choice D, it says Appts that include these facilities(child care ...)

hope u got the tip
if this explanation is not sufficient..let me know...

Could you please explain in more details?

Can anyone explain the difference between B and D

Thanks
Amit

Well, even I got it wrong but I understand the error now.

"for clustered urban houses to include" changes the meaning of the original sentence. The original sentence seems to suggest (although expressed incorrectly) that she was for clustered-urban houses that (ALREADY) include communal eating and social facilities. However, B suggests that they SHOULD include these facilities (like they should be added to existing clustered urban houses)

That is what I figured.

even I did not get this question at all. Stacey or any of the gurus plzzz help in explaining the question and all the answer choices. I am not gettn it. This is the second time I have got this question on this site and got stuck again...


Very thankful to you!!!

Folks read Manhattan SC guide... Include is a bossy verb which according to rules shpuld be preceded by that and subject and command subjunctive or bare form of verb

that+bossy verb+subject+bare for of verb

only D satisfies this rule.