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by maihuna » Tue Feb 24, 2009 8:27 am
Car owners who inflate their tires properly can
substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency, since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.

(A) Car owners who inflate their tires properly can substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency, since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.
(B) Because the underinflation of tires can waste up to five percent of a car's fuel by increasing car-road friction, car owners can substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency by properly inflating the tires.
(C) Their vehicles' fuel efficiency is substantially boosted by car owners through the proper inflation of tires that, when underinflated, can waste up to five percent of car fuel by an increase in car-road friction.
(D) The proper inflation of tires by car owners, due to the fact that underinflation can waste up to five percent of a car's fuel by the increase of car-road friction, can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.
(E) Because up to five percent of a car's fuel are wasted through the increases in car-road friction when the tires are underinflated, car owners properly inflating tires can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.
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by naaga » Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:45 am
IMO ans is A
what is the OA ?
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by x2suresh » Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:18 am
naaga wrote:IMO ans is A
what is the OA ?
A is wrong

I will go with B.

Inflating their (car owners) tires --> illogical..

inflate car tires, not car owners tires.
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by bmlaud » Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:18 am
I go with B, C D & E are out for errors. Btw A and B, B is better.
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by awesomeusername » Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:41 am
I initially chose (A). Why is (B) better? It is because the main point is given first?
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Re: car owner

by sudi760mba » Tue Feb 24, 2009 1:00 pm
maihuna wrote:Car owners who inflate their tires properly can
substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency, since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.

(A) Car owners who inflate their tires properly can substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency, since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.
(B) Because the underinflation of tires can waste up to five percent of a car's fuel by increasing car-road friction, car owners can substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency by properly inflating the tires.
(C) Their vehicles' fuel efficiency is substantially boosted by car owners through the proper inflation of tires that, when underinflated, can waste up to five percent of car fuel by an increase in car-road friction.
(D) The proper inflation of tires by car owners, due to the fact that underinflation can waste up to five percent of a car's fuel by the increase of car-road friction, can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.
(E) Because up to five percent of a car's fuel are wasted through the increases in car-road friction when the tires are underinflated, car owners properly inflating tires can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.
What is the OA?

B)Starting a sentence with "because" or "because of" is awkard but I'll keep this.
C)awkard
d)due to the fact, lengthy and awkard
3)nonsensical

I would vote A or B
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Re: car owner

by mjjking » Tue Feb 24, 2009 1:51 pm
sudi760mba wrote:
maihuna wrote:Car owners who inflate their tires properly can
substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency, since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.

(A) Car owners who inflate their tires properly can substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency, since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.
(B) Because the underinflation of tires can waste up to five percent of a car's fuel by increasing car-road friction, car owners can substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency by properly inflating the tires.
(C) Their vehicles' fuel efficiency is substantially boosted by car owners through the proper inflation of tires that, when underinflated, can waste up to five percent of car fuel by an increase in car-road friction.
(D) The proper inflation of tires by car owners, due to the fact that underinflation can waste up to five percent of a car's fuel by the increase of car-road friction, can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.
(E) Because up to five percent of a car's fuel are wasted through the increases in car-road friction when the tires are underinflated, car owners properly inflating tires can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.
"Car owners who inflate their tires" doesn't make sense!! it's b, not a.

I would vote A or B
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Re: car owner

by mjjking » Tue Feb 24, 2009 1:52 pm
sudi760mba wrote:
maihuna wrote:Car owners who inflate their tires properly can
substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency, since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.

(A) Car owners who inflate their tires properly can substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency, since the increase in car-road friction can waste up to five percent of car fuel by underinflation.
(B) Because the underinflation of tires can waste up to five percent of a car's fuel by increasing car-road friction, car owners can substantially boost their vehicles' fuel efficiency by properly inflating the tires.
(C) Their vehicles' fuel efficiency is substantially boosted by car owners through the proper inflation of tires that, when underinflated, can waste up to five percent of car fuel by an increase in car-road friction.
(D) The proper inflation of tires by car owners, due to the fact that underinflation can waste up to five percent of a car's fuel by the increase of car-road friction, can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.
(E) Because up to five percent of a car's fuel are wasted through the increases in car-road friction when the tires are underinflated, car owners properly inflating tires can substantially boost their fuel efficiency.

I would vote A or B
"Car owners who inflate their tires" is nonsense. eliminate A, chose B.
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by awesomeusername » Tue Feb 24, 2009 1:54 pm
Why is it nonsense?
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by mjjking » Tue Feb 24, 2009 1:59 pm
because car owners can inflate their cars' tyres, but they cannot inflate their tyres (as long as they have two legs!) :)
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by awesomeusername » Tue Feb 24, 2009 2:17 pm
Right, but if I own the tires, then they are MY tires. I don't have to physically use the tires for mobility for them to be considered MY tires.
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by subha_sri8 » Tue Feb 24, 2009 3:31 pm
OA please?
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by venusgarg » Tue Feb 24, 2009 3:41 pm
IMO B
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by welcome » Tue Feb 24, 2009 5:42 pm
IMO B.

A is clear out- "inflate their tires", owners cant have tire UNFORTUNATLY :lol:
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by fighting_cax » Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:37 pm
awesomeusername wrote:Right, but if I own the tires, then they are MY tires. I don't have to physically use the tires for mobility for them to be considered MY tires.
I would agree to this statement. Any more explanations why choice A cannot be correct?
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