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why e is wrong

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by Lifetron » Fri Jul 27, 2012 10:27 pm
Between D and E,

E is wordy.

D is parallel and concise.

So, obviously D ! :)
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by Phoenixvikas » Fri Jul 27, 2012 11:29 pm
D is the only option that is parallel.
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by mparakala » Sat Feb 02, 2013 5:05 am
In A & B, "which" incorrectly modifies population instead of remedies - INCORRECT

C - no parallelism - INCORRECT

D - Parallel - establishing, closing, requiring - CORRECT

E - no parallelism - INCORRECT

ANSWER: D
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by jaspreetsra » Thu Jan 08, 2015 1:09 am
A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.

(A) which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
(B) which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
(C) which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
(D) including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
(E) including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of

IMO: D
A, B, and C eliminated bcz of 'which'.
E is wordy.
D is concise and follows the rule of parallelism.
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